Question

17．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華，上周五你們班參觀了中國科技館，請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以"A Day in Museum"為題，給�？�"英語角"寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動(dòng)的全過程．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60．
提示詞：China Science and Technology Museum中國科技館
Last Friday，we were organized to pay a visit to China Science and Technology Museum．Upon arrival，we were given an introduction about the various exhibition areas of the museum at the main hall．We listened very carefullyand were attracted to the exhibition of science and life．
Entering the exhibition hall，we were amazed by the splendid space models including the China Railway High-speed （CRH），the spacecraft and the rockets，which appealed many of us to take photos and have a hot discussion．Lots of us agreed that our country is on the high way to getting stronger．Knowing that there's a chance to experiencethe making of the space models in person in the DIY area，we rushed to there without any hesitation．There，under joint efforts，we made a model plane with what we learned in the exhibition hall，which pleased all of us．
Time flied，we didn't want but we had to bid farewell to the museum and the fabulous exhibition．On the way home，the school bus was boiled with excitement．We laughed and promised ourselvesthat we would try our best to make our motherland much stronger．In my mind，there was a sweet dream rising in which Idiscovered an unknown land with a new spacecraft from our Shenzhouseries．Icouldn't help smiling from the bottomof my heart．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
Upon arrival，we were given an introduction about the various exhibition areas of the museum at the main hall
抵達(dá)后，他們向我們介紹了博物館的各種展覽區(qū)大廳．
高分句型二：
Entering the exhibition hall，we were amazed by the splendid space models including the China Railway High-speed （CRH），the spacecraft and the rockets，which appealed many of us to take photos and have a hot discussion．
進(jìn)入展廳，我們被燦爛的空間模型，包括中國高速鐵路的驚訝（CRH），飛船和火箭，這吸引了眾多人拍照，有一個(gè)討論的熱點(diǎn)．

解答 Last Friday，we were organized to pay a visit to China Science and Technology Museum．Upon arrival，we were given an introduction about the various exhibition areas of the museum at the main hall（高分句型一）．We listened very carefully and were attracted to the exhibition of science and life．
      Entering the exhibition hall，we were amazed by the splendid space models including the China Railway High-speed （CRH），the spacecraft and the rockets，which appealed many of us to take photos and have a hot discussion（高分句型二）．Lots of us agreed that our country is on the high way to getting stronger．Knowing that there's a chance to experience the making of the space models in person in the DIY area，we rushed to there without any hesitation．There，under joint efforts，we made a model plane with what we learned in the exhibition hall，which pleased all of us．
       Time flied，we didn't want but we had to bid farewell to the museum and the fabulous exhibition．On the way home，the school bus was boiled with excitement．We laughed and promised ourselves that we would try our best to make our motherland much stronger．In my mind，there was a sweet dream rising in which I discovered an unknown land with a new spacecraft from our Shenzhou series．I couldn't help smiling from the bottom of my heart．

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