Question

9．最近，在一些學校，考試作弊、抄襲作業(yè)、說謊等校園不誠信現(xiàn)象越來越普遍．請你結(jié)合實際，用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)在120-150的短文，對這一現(xiàn)象進行描述和分析，并對如何消除校園不誠信行為發(fā)表自己的看法．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
What we learn from the story is that we must be honest．
我們從這個故事中學到的道理是我們一定要誠實．
句首為what引導的主語從句，what在從句中作learn的賓語；is后面為that引導的表語從句．
高分句型二：
So measures must be taken to help students get rid of such dishonest behavior，making them really understand the lesson the English proverb，"No pains，no gains"，tries telling us．
所以一定要采取措施來幫助學生改掉不誠實的習慣，讓他們明白這個英語諺語"不勞無獲"試圖告訴我們的道理．
本句的主句部分為一被動結(jié)構(gòu)measures must be taken；后面的不定式為目的狀語；making…為現(xiàn)在分詞短語作目的狀語；最后還有一個省略了引導詞that或者which引導的定語從句the English proverb，"No pains，no gains"，tries telling us，用來修飾先行詞the lesson．

解答 Recently，dishonest behavior，such as cheating in exams，copying answers when doing homework，telling lies to teachers is becoming wild spread among students in some schools．This has aroused wide concern．
   We have all heard the story．Here Comes the Wolf．What we learn from the story is that we must be honest．（高分句型一）Being dishonest does harm not only to others but also to oneself．Some students don't work hard to achieve their goals．Instead，they play computer games，chat on lines or play with their friends．When examination days come，they choose to cheat to get good results．
Honesty is the most important quality of a person．So measures must be taken to help students get rid of such dishonest behavior，making them really understand the lesson the English proverb，"No pains，no gains"，tries telling us．（高分句型二）

點評 本書面表達為議論文，議論文是對某現(xiàn)象或觀點進行點評．寫作時，應注意按提出、分析、解決問題的邏輯順序來安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用足夠的論據(jù)來分層次論證自己的觀點．