Question

10．前不久我國宣布將建無圍墻小區(qū)，對此人們議論紛紛，請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇100字左右的短文．
贊成的人認為：1．緩解交通壓力               2．…（自己給出一條理由）
反對的人認為：1．盜竊等犯罪行為可能會增加    2．…（自己給出一條理由）
你的看法是：…
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It is reported that future communities in towns and cities will be built without fences in our country，which arouses heated discussions．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇要點文．寫作時，首先要寫清要點，包括：贊同者的理由和自己的看法，反對者的理由和自己的看法，我的觀點．其次，要以第一人稱來表述．最后要注意時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．
重點短語和句型：
arouse heated discussion 引發(fā)熱烈討論
in favor of 支持
harmonious life 和諧生活
on the contrary 相反
to some degree 在某種程度上
It is reported that future communities in towns and cities will be built without fences in our country，which arouses heated discussion．
it is reported that據(jù)報道，常用句型；句中which引導非限制性定語從句，修飾前面整個句子內(nèi)容．
Some people are in favor of the policy，saying it will contribute to reducing traffic congestion in major cities and making transport faster than ever．
句中現(xiàn)在分詞saying作伴隨狀語．
those who oppose the policy are desperately worried that more safety problems like theft and robbery will be growing．
句中who引導定語從句修飾those；that連接賓語從句．

解答 On Fenceless Communities
It is reported that future communities in towns and cities will be built without fences in our country，which arouses heated discussion．（高分句型一）（點明話題）
Some people are in favor of the policy，saying it will contribute to reducing traffic congestion in major cities and making transport faster than ever．（高分句型二）Besides，the new policy indicates that our country is following the international trend，saving natural and public resources and building residential zones without class differences．In this way，more room can be made for public uses．Thus，people can live a more convenient and harmonious life．（贊同者的看法和理由）
On the contrary，those who oppose the policy are desperately worried that more safety problems like theft and robbery will be growing．（高分句型三） What's more，people's privacy will be affected to some degree．（反對者的看法和理由）
Personally speaking，as the new policy is still under discussion，it remains to be seen whether it will have a positive or negative impact on society．（我的觀點）

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．