【題目】 寫作(共兩節(jié),滿分35分)

第一節(jié) 短文改錯(共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線(___),并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

I’m an senior high school student. I’m upset these days because my parents. They pay too much attention on my study. I have to report my test results to them every time. If I get good grades, they will be happy and satisfied. But if not, they will be worrying about me, especially my mom. I never want to let them down, but she has made a plan for my future. I was very bored with it and don’t know how to do. I know they really love me. I also know knowledges is important for everybody. Therefore, I can’t stand they are always making me to study. I really expect they can understand me.

【答案】

【1】ana

【2】because后加 of

【3】on--to

【4】worrying—worried

【5】them—her

【6】was—am

【7】how--what

【8】knowledges—knowledge

【9】Therefore –However

【10】to study去掉 to

【解析】

【1】ana不定冠詞誤用。senior是以輔音開頭的單詞,所以前面用a。

【2】because后加 of連詞誤用。because of后面加名詞;because后面要跟句子。

【3】on—to介詞誤用。pay attention to注意。

【4】worrying—worried形容詞誤用。be worried about擔心。

【5】them—her代詞誤用。此處是指不能讓我的媽媽失望。所以應用her代替。

【6】was—am 時態(tài)誤用。根據(jù)后半句的時態(tài),可知此處是一般現(xiàn)在時。

【7】how--what特殊疑問詞誤用。what做do 的賓語。

【8】knowledges—knowledge單復數(shù)誤用。knowledge是不可數(shù)名詞,不能變復數(shù)。

【9】Therefore –However副詞誤用。根據(jù)句意可知此處表示轉折。however然而。

【10】to study去掉 to非謂語誤用。make sb do sth.,是固定短語,中間不加介詞。

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