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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在此處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出修改的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。
Last summer I went to London for a holiday.  I spent just the week there.  While I am staying there I visited many places of interests. I also had lots of friendly talks with all kinds people.  Then I found a very interesting thing there.  One of my Chinese friends who have been lived in London told me that many English families like to buy new television sets.  There are many shops where can lend you TV sets.  The shops are often filled by a great many people.  There they can borrow a TV set very easy, and it costs them only a little.  Then it can be taken home or used for long.  

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Last summer I went to London for a holiday.  I spent just the week there.  While
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I am staying there I visited many places of interests. I also had lots of friendly talks
was                               interest
with all kinds ∧ people.  Then I found a very interesting thing there.  One of my
of
Chinese friends who have been lived in London told me that many English families ∧
living                                    don’t
like to buy new television sets.  There are many shops where can lend you TV sets.
that/which 
The shops are often filled by a great many people. There they can borrow a TV set
with
very easy, and it costs them only a little. Then it can be taken home or used for long.
easily                                             and

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