Question

隨著時(shí)代的發(fā)展和對(duì)外開(kāi)放的不斷深入，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生選擇出國(guó)留學(xué)深造，請(qǐng)就此現(xiàn)象寫(xiě)一篇短文發(fā)表你的看法（原因，利弊，你的觀(guān)點(diǎn)）。
要求：1.語(yǔ)言正確，邏輯通順，層次清楚；
2.字?jǐn)?shù)：120字左右。

Answer 1

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With the economic development of our country, more and more students choose to go abroad for further study. This phenomenon has drawn great attention.
Some people think it is great to study abroad.  If you go abroad, you can expand your horizons and experience the local culture at the same time. Also, you can make friends with more people. Above all, you can master a foreign language more quickly if you live in a place where the language is widely spoken.
Other people don't think it a good idea to go abroad. They think students who have language barrier may come across great difficulties in their study. And the expense for going abroad is too high. If you want to lower the expense by working part-time, your study will be influenced.
In my opinion, going abroad for further study is a good choice for people who can afford it. But for those who are not rich enough, they had better study here in China.

解析試題分析：先讀提示，要點(diǎn)要弄清；時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)要當(dāng)心，前后呼應(yīng)要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫(xiě)好細(xì)檢查，點(diǎn)滴小錯(cuò)別忽視。學(xué)生在明確目的和掌握要領(lǐng)后，要嚴(yán)格按照規(guī)定的時(shí)間去完成作文訓(xùn)練任務(wù)。最后要檢查（1）要點(diǎn)是否齊全，有無(wú)遺漏。（2）內(nèi)容是否連貫，有無(wú)缺詞。（3）語(yǔ)法是否正確，人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)等有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。（4）用詞是否得當(dāng)，有無(wú)習(xí)語(yǔ)及固定搭配等方面的錯(cuò)誤。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：為了避免太多單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語(yǔ)的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒(méi)把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫(xiě)一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句�？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語(yǔ)，句式。