Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字及圖表, 并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇 150 詞左右的文章。

"Please put your phone down Daddy, we haven't finished the story!" Hearing these heartfelt words from my four year old daughter was an uncomfortable wake up call. How had I let the shiny electronic box in my hand take so much of my attention that it could even interrupt a short bedtime story with my precious children?

It's no exaggeration to suggest that our mobile devices are in danger of taking over our entire lives. Time magazine found that 68% of users take their devices to bed with them, 20% check their phones every ten minutes and one third report feeling anxious when briefly separated from their beloved gadget. According to Osterman research, 79% of respondents take their work-related device on vacation and 33% admit to hiding from family and friends in order to check Facebook and Twitter. It's hard to deny that these are worrying trends.

【寫作內(nèi)容】用大約30字概括上文和圖表的主要內(nèi)容；結(jié)合上述信息, 用大約120字論述：（1）科技的發(fā)展是否意味著人們生活更幸福。（選擇“是”或“否”并論述你的觀點(diǎn)）（2）你認(rèn)為在生活中應(yīng)當(dāng)如何處理人和科技的關(guān)系。

【寫作要求】1. 寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句; 2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱; 3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

Answer 1

【答案】

A father’s concern that smartphone is depriving him of his precious family time does not stand alone. Favorable opinions as there are, the majority of Americans today view technology as hazardous. (31 words)

【選“是”】However, no pains, no gains. The world evolves as human technology leaps forward, along whose process there is bound to be sacrifices. The definition of happiness may vary, but a more connected, convenient, and creative society is undeniably nothing a modern man wouldn’t have desired. With digital devices booming around, we are given so many choices that our minds have been freed to a degree our ancestors could never anticipated.

That being said, to make sure technology doesn’t get in the way, you need to unplug from the information highway and share your journey with your family and friends from time to time. A balance between man and computers will lead to an ultimate happiness. (115 words)

【解析】

試題分析：請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字及圖表, 并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇 150 詞左右的文章。

【寫作內(nèi)容】用大約30字概括上文和圖表的主要內(nèi)容；結(jié)合上述信息, 用大約120字論述：（1）科技的發(fā)展是否意味著人們生活更幸福。（選擇“是”或“否”并論述你的觀點(diǎn)）（2）你認(rèn)為在生活中應(yīng)當(dāng)如何處理人和科技的關(guān)系。

【寫作要求】1. 寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句; 2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱; 3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

A father’s concern that smartphone is depriving him of his precious family time does not stand alone.句中運(yùn)用同位語(yǔ)從句；However, no pains, no gains.使用諺語(yǔ)為文章增色；The world evolves as human technology leaps forward, along whose process there is bound to be sacrifices. Whose引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；With digital devices booming around, we are given so many choices that our minds have been freed to a degree our ancestors could never anticipated. With的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)和so---that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；That being said, to make sure technology doesn’t get in the way, you need to unplug from the information highway現(xiàn)在分詞獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)在句中做狀語(yǔ)，讓文章大放異彩。