Question

12．某中學(xué)英語(yǔ)報(bào)社正在針對(duì)"如何過(guò)一個(gè)有意義的暑假"進(jìn)行討論．假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫出你暑假最想做的三件事及其理由，向該報(bào)投稿．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
      2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
  3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
  4．文章不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名．
Dear editor，
To spend a meaningful summer vacation，I plan as follow．                                      
Best wishes，
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇書信類作文，要求寫一篇關(guān)于"如何過(guò)一個(gè)有意義的暑假"的文章，要求包含暑假最想做的三件事及其理由，向該報(bào)投稿．寫作內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括：寫信目的；最想做的事情；想做該事的原因．審題時(shí)注意本文應(yīng)使用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般將來(lái)時(shí)．
重要短語(yǔ)：
as follow（如下）；as we all know（眾所周知）；of great significance（有重大意義）；broaden one's horizon（擴(kuò)寬某人的視野）；make good use of（充分利用）；decide to（決定做…）
高分句型：
1．As we all know，good health is the corner stone of our study and work．該句運(yùn)用比喻的修辭，生動(dòng)形象．
2．At the same time，I'll also do some reading，which will also benefit me lot．該句靈活運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)，并使用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
3．Not only can I gain more knowledge but also it can broaden my horizons．該句使用"not only…，but also…"句型及broaden one's horizon短語(yǔ)．
4．All in all，summer holiday is precious and I will make good use of it．靈活運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)明扼要的做出總結(jié)．
5．Apart from the above，I decide to do some housework or serve as a volunteer to help the farmers with their farm work，through which I can also experience the happiness of being diligent and helpful．運(yùn)用多個(gè)短語(yǔ)，高級(jí)詞匯及非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear editor，
To spend a meaningful summer vacation，I plan as follows．（寫信目的） Firstly，I'll take plenty of exercise．As we all know，good health is the corner stone of our study and work．Thus it is of great significance for us to do some physical exercise．At the same time，I'll also do some reading，which will also benefit me lot．Not only can I gain more knowledge but also it can broaden my horizons．Apart from the above，I decide to do some housework or serve as a volunteer to help the farmers with their farm work，through which I can also experience the happiness of being diligent and helpful．（寫出想做的事情及理由）
All in all，summer holiday is precious and I will make good use of it．（總結(jié)）
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 對(duì)于英語(yǔ)書信類的寫作要開篇點(diǎn)明寫信的目的，寫出自己暑假的打算及如何使之有意義，要以真誠(chéng)懇切的態(tài)度打動(dòng)讀信的人，在寫作過(guò)程中要注意靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述，合理地使用過(guò)渡語(yǔ)和連貫詞，使得整篇文章過(guò)渡自然，銜接緊密．