Question

假設(shè)你是李華。你的外國(guó)朋友來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的寒假生活和你對(duì)未來(lái)的憧憬。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信進(jìn)行回復(fù)�；匦彭毎�括如下要點(diǎn)：

1. 歡天喜地過(guò)春節(jié)；

2. 認(rèn)真復(fù)習(xí)，準(zhǔn)備高考；

3. 你所向往的大學(xué)及理由。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于100；

2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；

3. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear John,

I am pleased to hear from you. Now I will

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear John,

I am pleased to hear from you. Now I will tell you something about my winter holiday.

As is the same with every year, the Spring Festival was in the middle of the holiday, so it goes without saying that spending some precious time with the family during the festival was the most important thing to do in this holiday. Of course we had dinners with delicious food and parties with classmates and friends.

However, I did not forget that I would take the College Entrance Examination in about 3 months. I made full use of my time to prepare myself for the examination, as I could not fail my first real test in my life.

My dream university is Nankai University, which is located in my city, providing a wide range of courses for us to choose from. I believe that Nankai University will help me to achieve my goal.

Looking forward to your next letter.

Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如providing a wide range of courses for us to choose from.是伴隨狀語(yǔ)做修飾。 My dream university is Nankai University, which is located in my city, providing a wide range of courses for us to choose from.是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，還有倒裝句As is the same with every year, the Spring Festival was in the middle of the holiday。此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)hear from, it goes without, be located in, a wide range of等。以及連接副詞however的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。

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