Question

【題目】

贊成	反對
1.廣告能引導人們選擇貨物； 2.廣告能使消費者更好地了解貨物和商家； 3…….	1.經(jīng)常被虛假廣告欺騙； 2.在閱讀廣告上浪費了大量的時間； 3…….
你的觀點：1……. 2……

注意：1.短文的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.詞數(shù)100左右。

Nowadays, more and more advertisements appear on newspapers, broadcasting, magazines as well as streets. Advertisement is a popular way to communicate with consumers. People have different views on advertisements.

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But whether you like it or not, advertisements have become a part of our life.

Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, more and more advertisements appear on newspapers, broadcasting, magazines as well as streets. Advertisement is a popular way to communicate with consumers. People have different views on advertisements.

Some people think advertisement guides choices of goods. Meanwhile, advertisements also offer us some new information about the product. And they help consumers to know the goods and the businessmen better. In addition, consumers can gain not only knowledge of goods but also artistic enjoyment. Contrary to those people, many other people think advertisements are very unpleasant. Consumers are often cheated by the false advertisement on which consumers always waste a great deal of time. What’s more, consumers feel annoyed to be interrupted when they are watching TV play.

So I suggest that there should not be too many TV advertisements. The advertisements which will be issued must be approved by the Industrial and Commercial Bureau.

But whether you like it or not, advertisements have become a part of our life.

【解析】這是一篇正反觀點類作文，題目列出了一些要點，要求考生在敘述完題中觀點后，說出自己的觀點。在寫這篇作文時，應注意以下幾點：

1．議論文文章主體時態(tài)應用一般現(xiàn)在時。2. 要點要齊全，中正反方觀點各包含兩個原因，應完整敘述。但是不能用簡單句來羅列要點，要用適當?shù)倪B接詞使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然。另外，可以采用長短句結合等方法，使用多種句型，使文章句式多變。3. 行文思路要有邏輯性，比如可以讓兩方觀點對比，或者先說重點，再全面解釋。另外，可以適當選用較高級的詞匯使表達更地道，文章內(nèi)容更充實。

【范文亮點】

1.使用“Meanwhile，In addition，Contrary to，What’s more”等連接詞，很好地組織了文章結構，使文章敘述有條理、不散亂。2. 使用了被動句式和定語從句，句式高級：Consumers are often cheated by the false advertisement on which consumers always waste a great deal of time. 3. 靈活運用了一些較高級的句式、固定搭配和動詞，例如“guides choices of goods，know … better，artistic enjoyment，be approved by” 使文章句子表達清晰，給人留下深刻印象。