Question

【寫作內容】

下面是一場健康講座的內容簡介，請你用英語寫一篇短文介紹講座情況。

時間：上個月

演講者：健康專家張教授

主題：久坐傷身

現狀：隨著電視電腦的發(fā)展，人們坐著的時間超過歷史上任何時期

久坐的危害：頸痛，背痛，肥胖，心臟病，死亡

專家建議：學生，辦公室工作者等久坐人群應養(yǎng)成好習慣：步行或騎自行車上學上班，不開車；走樓梯，不坐電梯；打電話時站立；學生下課期間要起身活動。

【寫作要求】

只能用5個句子表達全部內容。

【評分標準】

句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Last month I attended a lecture delivered by Professor Zhang, a health expert, with the theme of “sitting for too long is bad for people’s health”. From the lecture I learned that with the development of TV and computers, people today sit a lot more than ever before in history, which has a bad effect on their health. Not only can this habit make your neck or back ache, but it may also make you fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. To prevent these problems from happening, Professor Zhang suggested that those who sit too much, such as students and office workers, should form some good habits in life, such as going to school or work on foot or by bike rather than by car, taking the stairs instead of the elevator and standing while talking on the phone. He particularly reminded us that we students should stand up to do some activities during break time at school.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求寫一篇英語短文，介紹健康講座的相關情況。注意只能使用5個句子來表達全部的內容；不要出現標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

范文涵蓋了所有要點內容，并進行了適當的拓展；范文還使用了賓語從句、非謂語動詞等語法知識，具備較強的語言運用能力。

語法方面：過去分詞作定語delivered by Professor Zhang；不定式表目的to prevent these problems from happening；賓語從句①that with the development of TV and computers, people today sit a lot more than ever before，②that those who sit too much should form some good habits in life，③that we students should stand up to do some activities；定語從句①which has a bad effect on their health，②who sit too much；倒裝Not only can this habit make your neck or back ache, but it may also make you fat等，顯示了較強的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了more than, have an effect on, prevent...from, such as, not only...but also, rather than, instead of等固定短語和搭配，使作文的內容變得充實。

考點：材料作文