Question

假設(shè)你是李華，下面是你的美國網(wǎng)友Alice發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件。

Dear Li Hua,

How are you getting along recently? I miss you very much, especially when I’ve met some difficulties in my studying of Chinese.

As you know, I’ve taught myself Chinese for more than half a year, but I can’t even read Chinese newspapers or magazines. I’m almost giving it up. Would you please give me some advice on how to study Chinese well? Thank you.

Yours ever,

Alice

請你根據(jù)來信內(nèi)容寫一封100詞左右的回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 對她的來信做出符合英美習(xí)慣的禮貌答復(fù)；

2. 回答她提出的問題；（至少兩條建議）

3. 你的祝愿。

請你用英語給Alice寫一封回信，回答她的提問。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

Dear Alice,

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Best wishes!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Alice,

I’m glad to receive your email. Everything is going well with me. Thank you for asking. As for how to study Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions based on my experience.

Chinese is an ancient language and it is rich in words and cultural contents, so you should first try to learn some useful words and phrases and their cultural backgrounds. Second, it is a hard job to learn a foreign language well, so learn Chinese step by step and never be too anxious. Third, you must have confidence and never give it up. Last, practice is the best way to learn Chinese. I think we can talk in Chinese on the phone, or you can write letters in Chinese as often as you can.

May you succeed!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)Alice的來信給她寫一封回信，給她提一些學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議。寫作要點包括：禮貌答復(fù)來信；至少提出兩條建議；表達(dá)自己的祝愿這三個方面。詞數(shù)在100詞左右，注意書信的格式；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點，進行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣�，并注意語句的連貫性；范文還使用了賓語從句、固定句型等語法知識，具備較強的語言運用能力。

語法方面：賓語從句①how to study Chinese well，②we can talk in Chinese on the phone；固定句型it is a hard job to learn a foreign language well等，顯示了較強的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面：范文注意使用first, and, so, second, third, last, or等來銜接句子和段落，使表達(dá)變得更有條理；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了be glad to do, go well with, as for, I’d like to, based on, be rich in, try to, give up, step by step, as often as you can等短語和搭配，使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實。

考點：書信類作文