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3．假定你是中學(xué)生李津．一個(gè)來(lái)自英國(guó)的中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)在你校舉辦英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)（English Culture festival）期 間來(lái)訪，并受邀觀看英文戲劇表演（English Drama Show）．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下寫作要點(diǎn)與要求代表學(xué)校寫一篇?dú)g迎辭：
1）表示對(duì)客人的歡迎；
2）介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等）
3）表達(dá)對(duì)客人的祝愿．
注意：
1）詞數(shù)：不少于100；
2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3）開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear British guests，
It's my great honour to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school．We are excited to have you here during our English Culture Festival．
As scheduled，we have English Drama Show this evening．The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in speaking and listening．Most of the plays that we will perform are by classic British authors，such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens．（活動(dòng)介紹）（高分句型一）The show will begin at eight o'clock tonight in the school hall．Dear guests，you are welcome to take part in it．I hope we will benefit a lot from your presence．
We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．（表達(dá)祝愿）（高分句型二）

Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息一個(gè)來(lái)自英國(guó)的中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)在你校舉辦英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)（English Culture festival）期 間來(lái)訪，并受邀觀看英文戲劇表演（English Drama Show）．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下寫作要點(diǎn)與要求代表學(xué)校寫一篇?dú)g迎辭，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：1）表示對(duì)客人的歡迎；2）介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等）3）表達(dá)對(duì)客人的祝愿．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
高分句型一：
Most of the plays thaty we will perform are by classic British authors，such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens．
高分句型二：
We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．
句型一 Most of the plays that we will perform are by classic British authors…該句中有一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，that在從句中作賓語(yǔ)，替代前面出現(xiàn)的先行詞plays
句型二 We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．該句中hope 后面跟了一個(gè)省略了引導(dǎo)詞的賓語(yǔ)從句：you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here
此外，該書面表達(dá)還用了以下重要句型和高級(jí)詞匯：it is+adj+to do sth      benefit…from

解答 Dear British guests，
      It's my great honour to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school．We are excited to have you here during our English Culture Festival．
      As scheduled，we have English Drama Show this evening．The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in speaking and listening．Most of the plays that we will perform are by classic British authors，such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens．（活動(dòng)介紹）（高分句型一）The show will begin at eight o'clock tonight in the school hall．Dear guests，you are welcome to take part in it．I hope we will benefit a lot from your presence．
      We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．（表達(dá)祝愿）（高分句型二）
      Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．