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16．假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你校外教 Mary 女士近期準(zhǔn)備回英國度假，為此，你班同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備開一個晚會為她送行．請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一封 e-mail，通知她相關(guān)情況．
1：對她的辛勤教學(xué)工作表示感謝．
2．晚會本周日晚上 7：30 開始，預(yù)計持續(xù) 1 個小時．
3．地點(diǎn)：高三 10 班教室 
4．活動：同學(xué)們一起唱英文歌，班長代表全班贈送她鮮花和親手制作的禮物．
注意：1．詞數(shù) 100 左右．2．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mary，
We hear that you'll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon．All the class will miss you very much during your absence!
                                                   
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇信件類的文章，是講述通知外教來參加送行party的一封通知信件．文章段落清晰，內(nèi)容緊扣題目要點(diǎn)．整篇文章分成總分總的形式來展現(xiàn)．第一段，主要總起了這封信的目的，表示對外教的工作表示感謝．第二段是對party的細(xì)節(jié)為外教展示．第三段，表達(dá)希望外教來參加party的愿望，總結(jié)了全文．行文段落都很有格式，并且每一個要點(diǎn)的表述都是圍繞著對外教表達(dá)的感激與不舍之情展開的．
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)撥】
文章的結(jié)構(gòu)性很強(qiáng)，全文來看以總-分-總的結(jié)構(gòu)緊緊地將全文扣�。�并且在"分"的條件下，分成了要點(diǎn)通過先后順序依次講述了幾個點(diǎn)，用Firstly、So at the end of the party，這些來進(jìn)行串聯(lián)，清晰明了不松散．同時文中還運(yùn)用到了不少佳句美詞．如：At the end of the party，the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts，which are mostly made by ourselves，which引導(dǎo)的主語從句的運(yùn)用，同時這里的詞組At the end of the party，也是值得我們加以學(xué)習(xí)并且運(yùn)用到實(shí)際中去掉；All of the class hope that you can come to join us singing some English songs and have a good time together，這是that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句的運(yùn)用．每篇文章中都需要一定的句型的運(yùn)用來扣住評委老師的眼球，而往往這哦都會被同學(xué)們所忽視．

解答 Dear Mary，
    We hear that you'll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon．All the class will miss you very much during your absence!
    Firstly，I'd like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class!So we've decided to have a farewell party this Sunday for you．（高分句型一）The party will start at 7：30 on Sunday evening in the classroom of Class 10，Grade III and will probably last about an hour．All of the class hope that you can come to join us singing some English songs and have a good time together．（高分句型二）At the end of the party，the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts，which are mostly made by ourselves．（高分句型三）
    We wish you a plain journey back home!We are also expecting you to come back to China．
                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．