Question

1．請你根據(jù)下面這幅漫畫用英語寫一篇短文．短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下三個方面：
1．描述這幅漫畫的內(nèi)容．
2．是否同意他們的教育方式，并陳述理由．
3．對家庭教育提出建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：150左右． 2．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名．
3．參考詞匯：溺愛 spoil v．
As can be seen in the cartoon，the young couple educate their child in different ways．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇看圖作文，談?wù)摰氖羌彝ソ逃�的問題，寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．同時注意題目要求必須使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容．
（高分句型一）What is illustrated in the picture is that Father is too hard on their child while Mother spoils him．
What is illustrated in the picture 是主語從句，意思是圖片所闡述的是…； that引導(dǎo)一個表語從句；while表示前后兩者對比；
（高分句型二）If we always love children too much，they will turn out to beself-centered and dependent，tending to do whatever they want to．
tending to do是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語表示結(jié)果；
（高分句型三）Only in this way can children benefit from proper family education and achieveall-round development．
only+介詞短語，主句倒裝；

解答 As can be seen in the cartoon，the young couple educate their child in different ways．Father educates their child with a ruler but Mother with a bar of chocolate．（高分句型一）What is illustrated in the picture is that Father is too hard on their child while Mother spoils him．They adopt trikingly inconsistent methods，which makes their child confused．（第一段描寫圖片內(nèi)容）
    （表達我的看法）I subscribe to neither of their education methods．If we always give children severe punishment，they will become nervous and lack self-confidence or become violent and aggressive，following in the father's footsteps．（高分句型二）If we always love children too much，they will turn out to be self-centered and dependent，tending to do whatever they want to．
    （給出建議）So far as I am concerned，it is better to use appropriate methods based on children's individual personalities．Since praise and criticism both play vital roles in children's education，it is essential that parents should try to maintain the balance between love and strictness．（高分句型三）Only in this way can children benefit from proper family education and achieve all-round development．（157 words）

點評 看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點謀篇布局．要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達出來，除了能表達清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)．如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個要素；如果是說明文或議論文，考生則首先要對圖畫的內(nèi)容進行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進行說明或議論．此時考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內(nèi)容．