Question

最近中國的空氣質(zhì)量引起了廣泛的關(guān)注。請閱讀下面的漫畫，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容要求： 1. 簡要描述漫畫內(nèi)容；

2. 簡要分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；

3. 針對以上現(xiàn)象談談你自己的看法（至少兩點）。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)150左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2.參考詞匯：口罩mask； 霧霾haze

Recently, the air quality in China _________________________________________

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Answer 1

Recently, the air quality in China has raised widespread concern. As is indicated in the picture, an old man and his grandson are taking a walk in the street with masks covering their mouths. As the haze is becoming heavier and heavier, they find it hard to see the buildings and trees around them clearly.

The picture conveyed here is that air pollution is quite severe in China. Many factors account for this phenomenon. In the first place, vehicles sending large quantities of poisonous gases are a major source of air pollution. Furthermore, factories that release a great deal of smoke are also responsible for the poor air quality. Besides, burning materials like coal or oil for homes and offices is another major contributor to air pollution.

Personally, to better the air quality, the government and the common citizens should make joint efforts. Riding and walking are wise options for public travels. Meanwhile, effective laws are supposed to be made to guarantee good air quality.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給漫畫寫一篇關(guān)于空氣質(zhì)量的短文。寫作要點包括：簡述漫畫內(nèi)容；分析產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的原因；談談自己的看法。至少要寫兩點看法，詞數(shù)在150詞左右，開頭不計入總詞數(shù)；注意使用參考詞匯；不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

范文使用了較多的高級詞匯：concern，factor，phenomenon，vehicles，major，F(xiàn)urthermore，joint，guarantee等，說明作者的詞匯量較大，靈活運用單詞進行遣詞造句的能力較強；

范文注意使用Recently, In the first place, Furthermore, Besides, Personally, Meanwhile等銜接句子和段落，避免了使用firstly, secondly等一般詞匯，比較有新意；

范文使用了非限制性定語從句As is indicated in the picture；with復合結(jié)構(gòu)with masks covering their mouths；原因狀語從句As the haze is becoming heavier and heavier；表語從句that air pollution is quite severe in China；定語從句that release a great deal of smoke等語法知識，使句式長短結(jié)合，比較協(xié)調(diào)；

范文使用了一些重要的短語：account for；large quantities of；be responsible for；contributor to；make joint efforts；are supposed to等，充實了作文的內(nèi)容。

考點：看圖作文