Question

 基礎寫作(共1小題，滿分15分)
【寫作情景】
假如你是李明，你跟你的朋友Paul聊天，他表示學習壓力很大，請你給他寫封信，給他提一些建議。
【寫作內(nèi)容】
將自己的問題告訴老師和同學，請求得到他們的幫助。
不要總想著考試成績，要多想想自己在哪些方面進步了，這樣就會給自己自信。
多做運動，運動可以幫助自己緩解壓力，并且有助于睡眠。
你對他的祝福。
【寫作要求】
用五句話表達全部的內(nèi)容，并組成一篇連貫的短文。（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入句數(shù)。）
【評分標準】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
Dear Paul,
I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Paul,
I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.
I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

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