Question

【題目】

英語話劇比賽

主題:人與自然

時(shí)間:7 月 15 日下午 2:00-5:00

地點(diǎn):101 教室

參賽選手:10 名學(xué)生

聯(lián)系人:Li H ua (電話 88507033)

假設(shè)你是江西師范大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李華。你們學(xué)校將舉辦一次英語話劇比賽(drama competition)，希望你能夠邀請附近某大學(xué)的外教 Ms. Smith 來作評委(judge)。請參照以下比賽通知給她發(fā)一份郵件。

注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 詞左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫。

Dear Ms. Smith,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

With best wishes,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ms. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, president of the Student Union of the Middle School Attached / Affiliated to Jiangxi Normal University, located just near the university where you are teaching. I am writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be the judge in our coming competition.

You see, to promote students’ interest in learning English, we’ve planned to hold an English drama competition, the theme of which is Man and Nature. It will begin at two on the afternoon of July 15th, lasting three hours. There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom101, and all the students of our school will be attending it.

We would feel much honored if you could join us and give us some instructions. You can reach me through my phone number 88507033 at your convenience. I’m looking forward to your reply.

With best wishes,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，邀請附近某大學(xué)的外教 Ms. Smith 來作話劇比賽評委。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

要求：

1．介紹自己

2．告知比賽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、主題、人數(shù)

3．邀請他擔(dān)任評委，告知聯(lián)系電話

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

Have the honor to do sth; judge; promote; interest; plan to do sth; hold; theme; last; compete with; attend; feel honored; join us; instructions; reach me; at your convenience; looking forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be the judge in our coming competition.

2. You see, to promote students’ interest in learning English, we’ve planned to hold an English drama competition, the theme of which is Man and Nature.

3. It will begin at two on the afternoon of July 15th, lasting three hours.

4. There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom101, and all the students of our school will be attending it.

5. We would feel much honored if you could join us and give us some instructions.

6. You can reach me through my phone number 88507033 at your convenience.

7. I’m looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, Not only…but (also)…, Including

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, But, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,on the other hand…, Some…,while others…,As for, So…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改