Question

9．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions．
簡要描述圖片內(nèi)容，并就圖片反映的現(xiàn)象，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />BLOG：博客
（注：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的個人信息）

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文，讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于博客的作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第三人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般將來時，內(nèi)容要點包括：一個父親問女兒今天在學(xué)校過的如何，女兒說你可以在我的博客上看到．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為簡要描述圖片內(nèi)容．第二部分為圖片反映的現(xiàn)象．第三部分為作者的看法．
重點短語與句型：
 became a inseparable part of 成為不可分割的一部分
What's worse糟糕的是
wide the gap 擴大差距
communicate with 交流
高分句型一：From the picture，we can know that the internet has became a inseparable part of our life此句用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句
高分句型二：It is right to worry about this此句it 作形式主語，真正主語是不定式．

解答 The Impact of the Internet Communction
In this picture，we can see a father asked his daughter about her school day and his daughter said to her dad that he could read the information on her blog．From the picture，we can know that the Internet has become a inseparable part of our life．（高分句型一）It has a wide impact acoss the world．However，some people are worried that the interpersonal communication will disapper because of the Internet．（描述圖片內(nèi)容）
It is right to worry about this．（高分句型二）Nowadays，we spend more and more time on the Internet．It lets us have less time to commucation with others．What's worse，it will widen the gap between people．Also，some people think they can solve problems and make faithful friends on Internet．（圖片反映的現(xiàn)象）
In the way of my thinking，the Internet is just a tool for us．When a friend or family ask how you are going，you should communicate with him or her．It can make him or her more easy to understand your feeling and give you suggestions（作者的看法）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．