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16．假定你是某國際學校學生會成員，學生會將于暑期邀請某知名書法家舉辦漢字書法培訓班，請你用英語寫一則通知，要點如下：
1．培訓班的目的；
2．學習書法的好處；
3．上課時間、地點：7月21日～8月10日，每天下午3：00-5：00；201室；
4．歡迎大家踴躍參加．
提示：書法calligraphy  書法家calligrapher
1．詞數100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)使行文連貫．
NoticeGood news for you!To help the students write Chinese characters correctly，clearlyand beautifully，a Chinese Calligraphy class will be opened next term．（高分句型一）A famous calligrapher will introduce students to the idea of calligraphy and have students practice．
The class will be of great benefit to us．Firstly，it can help us master some necessarycalligraphy skills．Secondly，writingChinese calligraphy can also provide light physicalexercise and calm the mind，which can have a positive effect on our health．（高分句型二）In addition，it's a good chance to involve Chinese culture in our life．
The class will be given in Room 201 from 3：00pm．to 5：00pm．every afternoon，fromJuly 21 to August 10．（高分句型三）
Take the chance!Try something new!You just might be surprised at how much youenjoy it!．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假定你是某國際學校學生會成員，學生會將于暑期邀請某知名書法家舉辦漢字書法培訓班，請你用英語寫一則通知，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：培訓班的目的；學習書法的好處；上課時間、地點：7月21日～8月10日，每天下午3：00-5：00；201室；歡迎大家踴躍參加．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be of great benefit to對…有益；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；In addition另外；have a positive effect on 對…有積極影響；
To help the students write Chinese characters correctly，clearly and beautifully，a Chinese Calligraphy class will be opened next term．（高分句型一）
Secondly，writing Chinese calligraphy can also provide light physical exercise and calm the mind，which can have a positive effect on our health．（高分句型二）
The class will be given in Room 201 from 3：00pm．to 5：00pm．every afternoon，from July 21 to August 10．（高分句型三）

解答 Notice
      Good news for you!To help the students write Chinese characters correctly，clearly and beautifully，a Chinese Calligraphy class will be opened next term．（高分句型一）A famous calligrapher will introduce students to the idea of calligraphy and have students practice．
      The class will be of great benefit to us．Firstly，it can help us master some necessary calligraphy skills．Secondly，writing Chinese calligraphy can also provide light physical exercise and calm the mind，which can have a positive effect on our health．（高分句型二）In addition，it's a good chance to involve Chinese culture in our life．
      The class will be given in Room 201 from 3：00pm．to 5：00pm．every afternoon，from July 21 to August 10．（高分句型三）
      Take the chance!Try something new!You just might be surprised at how much you enjoy it!

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．