Question

今年十月黃金周旅游異�；鸨�，由此也引起了人們的大量討論。前不久，相關部門針對黃金周的去留問題，在網(wǎng)上征集意見。下面是一個對10，000個網(wǎng)民所作的調(diào)查。請你把調(diào)查的結(jié)果用英語寫成短文，并談談自己的看法（不得少于兩點），發(fā)表在學校的報刊上。

觀點	原因
贊成長假期（45%）	假期集中，方便出外旅游，盡情放松；更多時間與家人一起。
取消長假期（55%）	容易造成交通阻塞，甚至交通事故；人流量大，對景點保護不利；各項服務質(zhì)量下降。

 
注意：1.對所給要點，不要簡單翻譯，要有適當發(fā)揮；
2.字數(shù)120左右。短文中開頭已寫好，不計入詞數(shù)。
3.參考詞匯：網(wǎng)民—Netizen   
Not long ago, opinions were collected on line about whether “Golden Week” should be kept or adjusted.                                                

Answer 1

Not long ago, opinions were collected on line about whether “Golden Week” should be kept or adjusted. Ten thousand Netizens took part in this investigation. Here are the results.
45% of the surveyed people hope to keep “Golden Week”. They think a long holiday not only provides them with adequate time for a trip but also they can relax themselves completely. What’s more, with a long holiday, they have more fun staying with the family.
However, 55% of the people think “Golden Week” should be canceled. They indicate that during the long holiday, there are more traffic jams and even traffic accidents. In addition, the crowded people gathering in some famous places has caused damage to the relics and led to poor service quality.
In my opinion, …

試題分析：本為屬于考生很熟悉的正反觀點類的議論文，要點基本上都給了出來，考生只需要把要點翻譯成英文即可，難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達出所需要的語義。在寫作的時候要選擇自己能夠運用的句型靈活表達，不要總是使用陳述句，可以變換著使用倒裝句，強調(diào)句等讓文章充滿變化。
點評：本文屬于正反觀點的議論文，話題與學生的生活息息相關，考生有話可說。難度在于表達的準確性和合理性。要運用合適的連接詞如worse still , after all等把要點連接成段落，讓文章成為一個整體。