Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，結(jié)合圖表內(nèi)容，按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的短文。

The Ministry of Education of the People’s Republic of China is moving to ban teachers from assigning homework on mobile apps or asking parents to grade students’ homework as part of an effort to save students’ eyesight. Through these efforts, the overall myopia (近視) rate among teenagers reduces by more than 0.5 percentage points per year from 2019 until 2023.

Provinces with a high incidence (發(fā)生率) of myopia are required to cut at least 1 percentage point per year.By 2030, the myopia rate for 6-year-old children should be below 3 percent, for primary school students, below 38 percent, for middle school students, below 60 percent, and for high school students, below 70 percent. Along with banning app-based homework assignments, the regulation would limit the use of electronic devices to 30 percent of total teaching time and instead encourage homework to be completed by hand on paper.

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約30個(gè)詞概括上述圖文內(nèi)容；

2. 結(jié)合上述信息，簡要分析導(dǎo)致學(xué)生近視問題的主要原因；

3. 請你從社會(huì)和個(gè)人兩方面談?wù)勅绾伪Ｗo(hù)學(xué)生的視力（不少于兩點(diǎn)）。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】The continuously-increasing myopia rate among students has caused public concern. Such is the gravity of the situation that the authority has decided to ban teachers from using social media to assign homework.

Many factors contribute to the myopia problem. With the popularity of digital products, an increasing number of students fix their eyes on the screen at least 4 hours every day. Moreover, academic burden forces students to overuse their eyes, which worsens the situation.

Immediate action should be taken to deal with the problem. First, the government should update the relevant rule to reduce school time, ensuring the students to use eyes less. Second, we students should say no to too much use of electronic devices. We’d better look into the distance and do eye exercise regularly, easing the tiredness of eyes.

Since eyes are the window of our soul, we should take measures to protect them. (150 words)

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇讀寫任務(wù)，要求寫一篇概要并分析問題的原因及提出建議。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一篇讀寫任務(wù)：1. 用約30個(gè)詞概括圖文內(nèi)容；2. 結(jié)合上述信息，簡要分析導(dǎo)致學(xué)生近視問題的主要原因；3. 請你從社會(huì)和個(gè)人兩方面談?wù)勅绾伪Ｗo(hù)學(xué)生的視力（不少于兩點(diǎn)）。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：myopia（近視），continuously-increasing（持續(xù)增長的），factor（因素），popularity（流行），public concern（公眾關(guān)注），digital product（數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品），overuse（過度使用），gravity（嚴(yán)重性）及measures（措施）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意概要的詞數(shù)要求、主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。

本文內(nèi)容完整，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。