Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

學(xué)校的�？�正在舉行征文比賽，請同學(xué)們分享自己第一次做某件事情的特別經(jīng)歷。請以“我第一次XXX”為題寫一篇作文參加比賽。

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Answer 1

【答案】 My first trip to tianchi

I have experienced many firsts, but the most unforgettable one is that I saw the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain for the first time.

Last July, my family and I took a tour to Changbai Mountain. We climbed up from the west slope, where the scenery basically remains the most primitive state. After climbing 1440 steps, we finally reached the top of the mountain. Although we were very tired, the temperature on the top of the mountain was very suitable, making us feel extremely comfortable. What's more, we were lucky enough to see the Tianchi, which is like a huge mirror inlaid among the peaks. It's said that 70% of the people who came to Changbai Mountain for the first time can't see the Tianchi because the weather on the top of the mountain is unpredictable, and the first time I came to Changbai mountain, I saw tianchi, which is really amazing.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是開放性作文，要求以“我第一次XXX”為題寫一篇征文。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求以“我第一次XXX”為題寫一篇征文：學(xué)校的校刊正在舉行征文比賽，請同學(xué)們分享自己第一次做某件事情的特別經(jīng)歷。請以“我第一次XXX”為題寫一篇作文參加比賽。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； unforgettable（難忘的），experience（經(jīng)歷），primitive state（原始狀態(tài)），suitable（適宜的），comfortable（舒適的），inlay（鑲嵌），amazing（不可思議的）及unpredictable（不定的、難以預(yù)測的）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。