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10．假定你們學(xué)校英語報社征集以"我最感激的一位老師"為主題的英語作文，請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕哪澄焕蠋煟?br />要點(diǎn)：1．簡要介紹這位老師；
   2．感激老師的理由；
   3．如何感激（如尊師重教，好好學(xué)習(xí)）．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；
   2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本題為提綱類寫作，以"我最感激的一位老師"為主題寫一篇英語作文，寫作要點(diǎn)：1．簡要介紹這位老師；2．感激老師的理由；3．如何感激（如尊師重教，好好學(xué)習(xí)）．寫作時以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主要時態(tài)．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：owe to（由于，歸功于）；as well as （也，而且）；conversation（談話）；encouraged sb to sth（鼓勵某人干某事）；lucky（幸運(yùn)的）
高分句型：1．He is of medium-height，but wears the warmest smile on his face，which melts all the hearts in my class．
which引導(dǎo)一個非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞which指代上文提到的內(nèi)容．
2．Then he listened to me①talking about my depressions，my unhappiness and my disappointment，②like a friend listening to a friend．
①現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨狀語；②這里like是介詞，介詞短語在句中作狀語．

解答 Everyone has a person he wants to say thank-you to in his deep heart．I owe my great gratitude to my maths teacher．
My maths teacher is a middle-aged man with a pair of glasses over his nose．He is of medium-height，but wears the warmest smile on his face，which melts all the hearts in my class（高分句型一）．In my eyes he is a devoted teacher as well as a good friend．
One day，I was very upset after getting the monthly exam result．He noticed this and asked me to go to his office．He began the conversation with his own high school experience．Then he listened to me talking about my depressions，my unhappiness and my disappointment，like a friend listening to a friend（高分句型二）．This made me feel at ease all at once．Finally，he encouraged me to keep on studying hard and have faith in myself．
Now，my maths has improved a lot thanks to his help．I feel so lucky to have such a teacher．

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意要點(diǎn)的提煉要全，關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次