Question

14．假設你是李梅，你的美國筆友Chris剛剛轉(zhuǎn)學，感到一切都很陌生，寫信向你詢問如何盡快融入新環(huán)境．請你根據(jù)一下信息回信．
（1）多跟同學交流溝通；
（2）積極參加學校活動；
（3）向老師尋求幫助．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)：100左右；
（2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
（3）開頭和結尾已給出差，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Chris，
I am sorry to hear that you arehaving trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestionsmaybehelpful．
　　　First，I think youmayneed to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．In this way，you willget to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usuallyinvolve teamwork and interactions with other students andare thereforegood for developingfriendly relationships．Lastly，faced with some tough problems，you mightconsider asking yourteachers，whocan usuallyoffer you some sensible suggestions．
　　　I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there isanything more I can do to help，please let me know．
Yours
Li Mei．

Answer 1

分析 1．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．句子里which引導非限制性定語從句，代指主句；and連接兩個并列的定語從句．
第二，多參加活動對你來說是個好主意，活動中會有合作和互動，因此有助于發(fā)展友好關系．
2．Lastly，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking your teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．句子里faced with 是過去分詞做狀語，表示"面對"；who引導非限制性定語從句，代指先行詞your teachers．
最后，面對難題，你可以考慮求助于老師，他們通常會給你一些合理建議．

解答 Dear Chris，
　　I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful．（點明書信目的）
　　　First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．【高分句型一】Lastly，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking your teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．【高分句型二】（列舉盡快融入新環(huán)境的方法）
　　　I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know．（表達意愿）
                                                                Yours
                                                               Li Mei

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