Question

【題目】假如你是李華,你收到朋友 Tom 的來信,信中提到他打算寒假來北京參觀故宮。請你根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封回信,介紹故宮的一些情況。

要點:1. 地理位置:位于北京的中心;

2. 歷史:始建于明朝,20 萬人用時大約 14 年,建成于 1420 年;

3. 故宮被譽為世界五大宮之首,每年吸引上百萬的游客。注意:

1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右;

2. 可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯:故宮the Imperial Palace 明朝 the Ming Dynasty

Dear Tom,

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am so glad to hear that you will come to Beijing and visit the Imperial Palace. And I am honored to introduce something about it.

The Imperial Palace, also known as the Forbidden City, is located in the center of Beijing. Dating from the Ming Dynasty, the Imperial Palace has a long history. The construction started in 1407 and it took 200,000 workers about 14 years to build it. It was finally completed in 1420. The Imperial Palace has collected all kinds of ancient treasures around China, making it enjoy a high fame as the top of five greatest palaces in the world. Every year millions of visitors from all over the world visit it and are impressed with its beauty.

I am sure you will enjoy yourself during the winter vacation. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一封書信：假如你是李華,你收到朋友 Tom 的來信,信中提到他打算寒假來北京參觀故宮。請你根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封回信,介紹故宮的一些情況。要點:1. 地理位置:位于北京的中心;2. 歷史:始建于明朝,20 萬人用時大約 14 年,建成于 1420 年;3. 故宮被譽為世界五大宮之首,每年吸引上百萬的游客。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； The Imperial Palace（故宮），Forbidden City（紫禁城），construction（建設(shè)），complete（完成）， treasure（珍寶），collect（收集），fame（名聲）及Ming Dynasty（明朝）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。