Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

I got up early this morning, so I went to school without breakfast. I walked in so a hurry that I stepped on a banana peel dropped by an old man walk in front of me. As the result, I slipped and fell in my back. I am so angry that I wanted to blame the old man, so I controlled myself at last. I picked out the banana peel, putting it into the dustbin and ran to school. The class had begun, but I was very happy because I did that what I should do to protect our environment.

Answer 1

【答案】

I got up this morning, so I went to school without breakfast. I walked in a hurry that I stepped on a banana peel dropped by an old man in front of me. As result, I slipped and fell my back. I so angry that I wanted to blame the old man, I controlled myself at last. I picked the banana peel, it into the dustbin and ran to school. The class had begun, but I was very happy because I did what I should do to protect our environment.

【1】early → late

【2】so → such

【3】walk→ walking

【4】the → a

【5】in → on

【6】am → was

【7】so → but

【8】out → up

【9】putting →put

【10】去掉that

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】early → late 考查副詞及語義。由后一句so I went to school without breakfast可知“我”不是起床早而是晚。

【2】so → such 考查形容詞。so是副詞，常用于so + adj. + a/an + n.結(jié)構(gòu)，such是形容詞，常用結(jié)構(gòu)為such + a//an + adj. + n.。

【3】walk→ walking 考查非謂語動詞。根據(jù)句意，“我正匆忙地走著忽然踩在了一塊由正走在我前面的老頭扔的香蕉皮上”，由語境看老頭正走著，故應(yīng)用動詞-ing形式作定語。

【4】the → a 考查冠詞和固定搭配。as a result是固定短語，意為“結(jié)果”。

【5】in → on 考查介詞。fall on one’s back意為“仰面朝天摔倒”，其中的介詞on不可換成in。

【6】am → was。考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)上下文語境，這里敘述的是過去的事，前后都是用的過去時。

【7】so → but 考查連詞。根據(jù)前后句及上下文邏輯關(guān)系看，前后句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用連詞but。

【8】out → up 考查固定短語。動詞短語pick up才是“撿起，拾起”之意，pick out意為“挑出，挑選”不符合語境語意。

【9】putting →put 考查動詞形式。根據(jù)語境，這里用了幾個連續(xù)動作，動詞時態(tài)和形式應(yīng)前后一致，故應(yīng)用put的過去時put形式。

【10】去掉that 考查賓語從句。本句what直接引導(dǎo)賓語從句，并在從句中作賓語，that是多余的。