Question

16．下面四幅圖畫描述的是Lily和Lina在上學(xué)路上發(fā)生的一幕．請根據(jù)圖畫所提供的信息，寫出故事發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，并簡要發(fā)表個人觀點．

注意：
    1．短文必須包括圖畫的主要內(nèi)容，短文的內(nèi)容要連貫完整．
    2．詞數(shù)100左右．
    參考詞匯：救護車ambulance．

Answer 1

分析 本文為圖畫作文．
寫作主題可以為：遵守交通規(guī)則，注意安全
寫作要點為：1，描述圖畫內(nèi)容：車輛沖紅燈，撞倒人后肇事逃逸，路人幫助，送醫(yī)救治；2，呼吁大家遵守交通規(guī)則，避免釀成慘�。�

解答 One possible version：
One day，Lily and Lina were going to school happily when a speeding car ran into them．One of them was seriously injured and lay on the street，unconscious．Seeing the terrible scene，the driver drove his car away as fast as he could without stopping．At the very moment，some passersby rushed over．One man called 120 to get help．Minutes later，an ambulance came with a siren wailing．The injured girl was carried into the ambulance by a passerby and sent quickly to hospital．
From the story we can see such people as the guilty driver should be punished by law．We do believe more people with a sense of justice can be found in our society．
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點評 考生需根據(jù)圖畫信息，揭示圖畫中的道理，根據(jù)所提供信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．