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2．假如你是李華，你所在的國際學(xué)校打算舉行一次為期七天的"走進(jìn)世界名校"的夏令營活動．請你給美籍校長Roy寫一封信申請參加．內(nèi)容包括：
1．你對夏令營活動的了解（參觀名校，聽教授演講和交外國朋友等）；
2．參加的意愿和理由．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr Roy，
I'm glad to know that you are going to hold a seven-day summer camp called"Walking into the World-famous Campus"．I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on，which I think are of great use to us high school students．
I have great interest in it．The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities．What's more，it will encourage me to study harder and improve my communication skills．
Thanks for your reading my application．I hope I will have a chance to take part in the activity．I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是給美籍校長Roy寫一封信，申請參加"走進(jìn)世界名校"的夏令營活動．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)．內(nèi)容包括：一對夏令營活動的了解；二參加的意愿和理由；三期盼得到答復(fù)．
高分句型：
1．I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on，which I think are of great use to us high school students．句子里 that 引導(dǎo)賓語從句there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指前面there are 結(jié)構(gòu)；I think 是插入語；of great use=useful．
我已經(jīng)了解到，夏令營里有各種各樣精彩的活動，例如參觀名校，聽教授演講和交外國朋友等，我認(rèn)為這些活動對我們高中生有很大的用處．
2．The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities句子里that 引導(dǎo)表語從句；gain much knowledge and experience 比賽"獲得知識和經(jīng)驗(yàn)"．
原因是我能夠從活動里獲得知識和經(jīng)驗(yàn)．

解答 Dear Mr Roy，
     I'm glad to know that you are going to hold a seven-day summer camp called"Walking into the World-famous Campus"．I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on，which I think are of great use to us high school students．【高分句型一】（對夏令營活動的了解）
I have great interest in it．The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities．【高分句型二】What's more，it will encourage me to study harder and improve my communication skills．（參加的意愿和理由）
Thanks for your reading my application．I hope I will have a chance to take part in the activity．I'm looking forward to your early reply．（期盼得到答復(fù)）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
寫作中，要注意 抓住提示的信息，并注意進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮． 表達(dá)中要注意確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)與語態(tài)，注 意句式結(jié)構(gòu)的正確和變化多樣，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用 短語、并列句、復(fù)合句、介詞短語和副詞 等，以使文章飽滿．