Question

請根據(jù)下面的英文短詩，展開適當?shù)南胂�，寫一篇短文�?/p>

標題為：My Teacher Mr. Moore

There’s a teacher Mr.Moore,

Who is lovely and thirty-four.

Always encouraging us to try,

He leads us to a world of “why”,

We all admire him more and more.

注意：1.不得照抄短詩原文；

2.必須結(jié)合短詩的內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮想像，適當展開；

3.必須突出短詩的主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫；

4.短文不能寫成詩歌形；

5.詞數(shù)：120左右。

Answer 1

My Teacher Mr.Moore

Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the one who impresses me most.Though he is 34,he looks very young for his age.And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.

Compared with other teachers,Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching.He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.In his opinion,we should not only know “what”,but also understand “why”.So,instead of giving us answers immediately,he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.With his help,we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problems.What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!

He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

解析:

本書面表達要求根據(jù)詩歌展開合理想像，所以按照詩歌內(nèi)容，短文應(yīng)該包含以下要素:

1.Mr.Moore 是我們的老師，他的年齡；

2.Mr.Moore的教學(xué)方法和給我們的啟發(fā)；

3.我們都喜歡和羨慕Mr.Moore。