Question

8．學(xué)校英文雜志New Babel向高中學(xué)生征文，主題是"My Life in the Senior Year"，內(nèi)容包括：
1．高中生活概況；
2．問(wèn)題或困難；
3．解決方法或建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
My Life in the Senior Year
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇以高中生活為話(huà)題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一高中生活概況；二存在的困難；三自己的建議．
高分句型：
1．With a big dream to fulfill，I enjoy my school life，working diligently and passionately．句子里With a big dream to fulfill是with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，to fulfill表示"將要實(shí)現(xiàn)的"；working diligently and passionately是伴隨狀語(yǔ)，和主語(yǔ)I 之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系．
因?yàn)橛幸粋�(gè)夢(mèng)想要實(shí)現(xiàn)，我喜歡我的學(xué)校生活，勤奮和熱情地學(xué)習(xí)著．
2．My parents also push me a lot，which contributes to some unpleasant conflicts or misunderstanding between us．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句；contributes to 表示"導(dǎo)致"．
父母總是督促我學(xué)習(xí)，這導(dǎo)致我們自己有了不令人愉快的沖突和誤解．

解答 A possible version：
As a senior two student，my life is extremely full and occupied．With a big dream to fulfill，I enjoy my school life，working diligently and passionately．【高分句型一】（高中生活概況）
However，I can't deny that I am burdened with so much that I feel exhausted sometimes both physically and mentally．Too much homework takes away our time for enough exercise and the development of personal hobbies．My parents also push me a lot，which contributes to some unpleasant conflicts or misunderstanding between us．【高分句型二】（存在的困難）
How I wish our society would pay more attention to our health and all-round development!Leaving us less but more efficient homework will help make our study life in senior three more colorful!（自己的建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類(lèi)作文．寫(xiě)作文時(shí)，要往英語(yǔ)書(shū)上靠攏，多找書(shū)上的單詞，這樣能證明你是這個(gè)年級(jí)的學(xué)生．同時(shí)不要混淆英語(yǔ)和漢語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)法規(guī)則．這需要多看些英語(yǔ)書(shū)籍，來(lái)豐富自己對(duì)英語(yǔ)的認(rèn)識(shí)．