Question

8．學校英文雜志New Babel向高中學生征文，主題是"My Life in the Senior Year"，內(nèi)容包括：
1．高中生活概況；
2．問題或困難；
3．解決方法或建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
My Life in the Senior Year
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇以高中生活為話題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一高中生活概況；二存在的困難；三自己的建議．
高分句型：
1．With a big dream to fulfill，I enjoy my school life，working diligently and passionately．句子里With a big dream to fulfill是with的復合結(jié)構(gòu)，to fulfill表示"將要實現(xiàn)的"；working diligently and passionately是伴隨狀語，和主語I 之間是主動關(guān)系．
因為有一個夢想要實現(xiàn)，我喜歡我的學校生活，勤奮和熱情地學習著．
2．My parents also push me a lot，which contributes to some unpleasant conflicts or misunderstanding between us．句子里which引導非限制性定語從句，代指主句；contributes to 表示"導致"．
父母總是督促我學習，這導致我們自己有了不令人愉快的沖突和誤解．

解答 A possible version：
As a senior two student，my life is extremely full and occupied．With a big dream to fulfill，I enjoy my school life，working diligently and passionately．【高分句型一】（高中生活概況）
However，I can't deny that I am burdened with so much that I feel exhausted sometimes both physically and mentally．Too much homework takes away our time for enough exercise and the development of personal hobbies．My parents also push me a lot，which contributes to some unpleasant conflicts or misunderstanding between us．【高分句型二】（存在的困難）
How I wish our society would pay more attention to our health and all-round development!Leaving us less but more efficient homework will help make our study life in senior three more colorful!（自己的建議）

點評 考查提綱類作文．寫作文時，要往英語書上靠攏，多找書上的單詞，這樣能證明你是這個年級的學生．同時不要混淆英語和漢語的寫法規(guī)則．這需要多看些英語書籍，來豐富自己對英語的認識．