Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

James Bender, in his book How to Talk Well tells the story of a farmer who grew awardwinning corn.Each year he won a blue ribbon.One year a newspaper reporter interviewed him and learned something interesting about how he grew it.

The reporter discovered that the farmer shared his seed corn with his neighbors.“How can you afford to share your best seed corn with your neighbors when they are entering corn in competition with yours each year？” The reporter asked.“Why，” said the farmer, “didn't you know? The wind picks up pollen(花粉) from the ripening corn and carries it from field to field.If my neighbors grow bad corn, crosspollination(異花受粉) will slowly reduce the quality of my corn.If I am to grow good corn, I must help my neighbors grow good corn.”

He is very much aware of the connectedness of life.His corn cannot improve unless his neighbors' corn also improves.The lesson for each of us is this: If we are to grow good corn, we must help our neighbors grow good corn.

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1．突出：人與人之間本應(yīng)和睦相處、互幫互助、共同進步；

2．以約30個詞概括短文的要點；

3．以約120詞發(fā)表你的看法，談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識。

（寫作要求）

1．作文中可以使用實例來支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容論述，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

（評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】A farmer always won a blue ribbon in the state fair every year.His secret is that he helped his neighbor grow good corn to grow his own corn better.

So is our life.People in the world cannot live by his or her self, not depending on others.Those who choose to live well should also help the poor to live well, for the value of a life is not measured by the wealth one gains but by what the life brings to others.In fact, we're all members of a big family.As a Chinese saying goes, “One for all and all for one.” Donating blood to others benefits the donator.Picking up rubbish in your neighborhood creates a tidy environment for all the residents.

Therefore, we should help each other and get along with each other to improve our lives.Only in this way can we get our dreams of living a harmonious life realized.

【解析】

本文要求閱讀材料，用約30個詞概括短文的要點；然后再用約120詞發(fā)表自己的看法，談?wù)剬Υ耸碌恼J(rèn)識。寫作時要求突出：人與人之間本應(yīng)和睦相處、互幫互助、共同進步。

第一步：先通讀材料，把握要點。材料講述的是每年種玉米獲獎的農(nóng)民成功的秘訣就是懂得關(guān)聯(lián)性，知道和鄰居分享好玉米種子，共同提高，共同發(fā)展。然后由此發(fā)表自己的觀點，人與人之間本應(yīng)和睦相處、互幫互助、共同進步。

第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：helped his neighbor grow good corn, So is our life, depending on others, bring to others, a big family, help each other, get along with each other, living a harmonious life.

第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。