Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合事例，寫一篇英語短文。

If your life feels like it is lacking the power you want and the motivation you need, sometimes all you have to do is change your point of view.

注意：

無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；

除詩歌外，文體不限；

文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱

詞數(shù)120詞左右。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Life is never what you have expected. Some day you might be stuck in a dilemma where you lack the power you want and the motivation you need, in which case it is high time you should shift your point of view.

Take myself for example, there was a time when I moved into another school. Not fitting in with the new environment, I didn’t dare to talk with the others, let alone get on well with them. However one of my classmates came to my aid, inviting me to join their study club. Not until then did I realize I could have adapted to the new surroundings if I had changed my point of view earlier.

Without properly shifting your views, the flowers of success won’t blossom. So change your point of view right now!

【解析】

試題分析：考查議論類書面表達(dá)。題文大意：如果你的生活感覺缺少了動(dòng)力，那么有時(shí)候你需要改變一下你的觀點(diǎn)。題文已經(jīng)給出了議論的中心，故考生需要抓住這個(gè)主題展開，需要寫出支持這個(gè)論點(diǎn)的論據(jù)。切不可抄襲英語提示。

亮點(diǎn)分析：本文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。首先開篇點(diǎn)題，第二段給出論據(jù)，第三段再次重申主題。本文用來許多好的句型，比如表語從句Life is never what you have expected.，非限制性定語從句lack the power you.., in which case it is high time you should shift your point of view.，it’s high time結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，not until的倒裝句Not until then did I realize I could have adapted to the new surroundings if I had changed my point of view earlier.等，可見考生基本功的扎實(shí)。本文亦有許多好的短語，比如：be stuck in，dare to，adapted to。這些好的短語體現(xiàn)了考生的豐厚積累。

考點(diǎn)：考查議論類書面表達(dá)