小偉減肥以后，感到身體疲倦、虛弱，不知如何是好，于是他寫了一封電子郵件向健康專家求教。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，以小偉的名義寫一封郵件。詞數(shù)100以上。

原因：覺得自己太胖，體重不斷增加，擔(dān)心形象不美，有同學(xué)罵他。

過程：

1、去健身房，兩三次就放棄了，感覺太累也沒時(shí)間。

2、節(jié)食，堅(jiān)持了大約一個(gè)星期，經(jīng)常餓得不能繼續(xù)他的學(xué)習(xí)。

3、悄悄服用減肥藥，一開始有效果，體重迅速下降，但減肥藥對(duì)他產(chǎn)生副作用。

Dear Health Expert,

I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help. I feel I am a little too fat. What’s worse, I am putting on weight all the time. I am very worried about my figure and how I look. I even fear that some of my classmates call me names.

At one time, I tried to work out in a gym two or three times, but I finally gave up just because I had no time for it and always felt very tired after doing exercise. Once I tried going on a diet. However, after about a week, I could not go on because I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies. Then I bought and took weight-loss pills in secret. Shortly after, they did work and I was losing weight fast. But soon I felt tired and weak sometimes.

I know those pills usually have bad effects on our health. Thus, I don’t know what I should do. Could you be kind enough to give some good advice?

Best wishes

Xiao Wei

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信寫作，首先要注意格式規(guī)范和正確。開頭要有稱呼，結(jié)尾要落款。書信的內(nèi)容寫信者小偉向健康專家求救。說明自己的肥胖問題和現(xiàn)在面臨的身體問題。所以對(duì)于問題原因和過程的描述，盡量真實(shí)具體，以便于健康專家給予合理有效的建議。時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章使用ask for your help，What’s worse，put on weight，be worried about，work out，give up，go on a diet，Shortly after，losie weight，have bad effects on等詞組和短語，使得文章更加生動(dòng)。敘述過程的時(shí)候，使用At one time，Once，Then，Shortly after說明順序，使得文章條理清晰，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。However, after about a week, I could not go on because I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies.使用so…that…句型，表示“如此…以致…”，使得文章句式靈活多樣。文章開頭使用I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help.直接說明寫信目的；結(jié)尾處使用Thus, I don’t know what I should do. Could you be kind enough to give some good advice?表達(dá)自己的請(qǐng)求。

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