Question

書面表達 （滿分 30 分）
隨著經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，城市交通問題越來越嚴(yán)重。請根據(jù)表格中的提示，寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />

現(xiàn)狀	解決方式
1.高峰期交通堵塞，浪費時間； 2.難找到停車的地方，空氣質(zhì)量差。	1.多建地下停車場，大力發(fā)展公共交通； 2.增強環(huán)保意識，使用替代能源。

注意：1. 文章必須包括主要內(nèi)容，過渡自然。
2. 參考詞匯：awareness 意識    alternative energy  替代能源  
3. 詞數(shù)120左右。
With the development of Chinese economy, the traffic problem in cities is becoming more and more serious.                                                                                        
                                                                                                
                                                                                                

Answer 1

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With the development of Chinese economy, the traffic problem in cities is becoming more and more serious.
Firstly, it is very common for people to get stuck in the traffic jam during the rush hour, which is a great waste of time. What’s more, hardly can you find a parking place, especially in the center of a city. Furthermore, as a result of too many cars, the air has been seriously polluted.
Fortunately, people have come up with some good ideas. More underground parking lots should be built, and the public transport system is to be improved. Meanwhile, we should improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment and use as many alternative energy resources as possible.
As far as I am concerned, great efforts should be made to solve this problem. Riding or walking to school or work should be strongly recommended.

解析試題分析：考生如果想拿到高分，必須按照要求在作文中覆蓋試題規(guī)定的所有內(nèi)容要點，完成試題任務(wù)，達到預(yù)期的寫作目的。在寫作時，考生應(yīng)該留心是否要點完整，是否有要點遺漏。在題示要點完整的前提下，考生可以作文材料為中心進行適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮，適當(dāng)補充一部分，以期使作文更加完美。千萬不要打破常規(guī)，追求所謂的標(biāo)新立異，因為這樣做，往往會適得其反，不但不能出色地完成書面表達的任務(wù)，而且最終拿不到自己心目中理想的作文分?jǐn)?shù)。這里應(yīng)該注意動詞的時態(tài)及人稱的變化。
考點：提綱作文。
點評：在寫作時，考生應(yīng)該盡可能地減少錯誤，避免出現(xiàn)漢字、拼音、空格等低級錯誤，盡量避開自己使用起來沒有把握的單詞和句子。如果為了追求句式的變化而出現(xiàn)了一些本來可以避免的錯誤，就得不償失了。在保證準(zhǔn)確的前提下，考生才可以考慮句式的變化，應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。