你的朋友湯姆寫信給你說寒假期間準(zhǔn)備來東莞旅游，請你作為向?qū)Ыo他介紹一下東莞。

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東莞：位于廣東東南部，是一個(gè)具有悠久歷史的城市。

氣候：溫和，年平均溫度為23.3度。

景點(diǎn)：很多景點(diǎn)，例如松山湖，可園和觀音山等。

松山湖介紹：

（1）綠樹成蔭，草地碧綠，湖水清澈。

（2）在湖邊可以散步，踩自行車，做運(yùn)動，看書，野炊等休閑活動。

（3）是一個(gè)接近自然和休閑的好地方。

要求：字?jǐn)?shù)：100個(gè)詞左右

參考詞匯：平均氣溫：average temperature

松山湖：Sonshan Lake,

可園：Keyuan

觀音山:Guanyin mountain.

Dongguan City, which is in the south- east of Guangdong province, has a long history. It attracts thousands of people from different places to come to Dongguan to travel or to work. Many of them like the mild climate, especially in winter. Everyone can enjoy the average temperature of 23.3℃ in a year. There are many places of interest in Dongguan City, such as Sonshan Lake, Keyuan and guanying mountain.

Sonshan Lake is a beautiful place with lots of green trees and glasses. Along the big lake, where there is clean water with all kinds of fish in it, you can take a walk, cycle or have a picnic. It is really a good place for you to get close to nature and relax yourself.

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是地方介紹類說明文，根據(jù)寫作要求可知要考生作為導(dǎo)游為朋友湯姆介紹東莞的地理環(huán)境和著名景點(diǎn)。句子的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，寫作要求必須涉及東莞的氣候，著名景點(diǎn)松山湖，字?jǐn)?shù)限制在100字左右。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】作文由于字?jǐn)?shù)限制，可將句子控制在七到八句左右，使用各種從句即可達(dá)到字?jǐn)?shù)要求又可是文章看起來簡練干凈。第一段中，作者按照寫作要求先寫了介紹了東莞的地理位置，It attracts thousands of people from different places to come to Dongguan to travel or to work.在此句中作者使用了多次to將原本分成幾個(gè)部分的句子連接起來，顯得不拖沓。然后介紹了是它溫和的氣候時(shí)，用到了短語the average temperature of…平均氣溫為，提高了作文的檔次。最后一句介紹了松山湖的景觀，在作文中承上啟下。在第二段中開始描繪松山湖，呼應(yīng)第一段。在文中作者用到了多個(gè)定語從句如Dongguan City, which is…；Along the big lake, where there is…使整篇文章井井有條，詳盡而不雜亂。

考點(diǎn)：考查材料性作文寫作

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