Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹你在居家自主學(xué)習(xí)期間第一次為家人做飯的過程，并以“My First Cooking”為題，給�？�“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件。

提示詞：家常菜homely dishes

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于60；

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】◇ Version 1

Last Friday I finished my online course with a rather exhausted mind. Weekdays are finally over but the burdens seemed impossible to go away

I was sitting before my desk and doing my homework. When I looked at the clock, it was already 6:20 p.m. I was starving, and neither of my parents had returned from work. Wrestling with my hunger, an idea suddenly occurred to me. Why not cook a dish for my parents myself? Although I’ve never cooked before. I was sure I could figure it out.

I turned on my smartphone and went online to search for the recipe of homely dishes. There was a great amount of information provided on the Internet, and after taking various factors into consideration. I decided to cook a fish.

The process was not so hard as I imagined, as a matter of fact. I followed the instructions strictly and was extremely careful not to miss any single details in the entire procedure. The outcome was of course far from brilliant but seemed quite decent. It actually tasted not bad at all.

Apart from the main dish, I also came up with a vegetable dish and some rice and soup. When my parents came home, they were literally astonished. Mom took pictures with her phone while Dad gave me an encouraging smile and a big thumb up.

It was the first time I had cooked and the experience means so much to me. It set me free from my busy daily routine, giving me a precious opportunity to do something for the ones I cherish and react to their unconditional support that I’ve neglected for so long.

◇ Version 2

Last Friday, after I finished my online classes, I started doing homework as I always do. Time seemed to fly by and as I glanced up at the clock, it was already 6:20. My parents were still at work and must be worn out after a week’s work Suddenly, an idea flashed through my mind—I could cook for my parents.

As it was the first time for me to cook, I searched for the recipe of homely dishes on the Internet. After some comparison, I chose two dishes that my parents liked the most.

Dealing with the fish was the hardest part. After laying the fish in the pan, drops of oil spilled out and landed on my finger. I was scared but managed to calm down and rolled over the fish. As the color of the fish turned golden, I added some salt and garlic. Finally, I finished my first dish and it smelt really great.

My parents arrived home the moment I finished cooking. Serving them with the food I made, I was nervous because I didn’t know if I had got everything right. Thankfully, my dad gave me a thumb-up after his first bite and my mom took photos to mark this unforgettable meal. My parents said that I had grown. I was delighted to hear that and was ready to shoulder more things for my parents in the future.

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫類作文。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹你在居家自主學(xué)習(xí)期間第一次為家人做飯的過程，并以“My First Cooking”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：homely dishes(家常菜)；exhausted (筋疲力盡的)；search for (尋找)；as a matter of fact (事實上)；far from (遠非)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般過去時。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。