Question

【題目】全世界的環(huán)境問題變得越來越嚴(yán)重。例如汽車污染的空氣影響了人們的呼吸，工廠釋放污染的氣體，山上的樹木被砍伐，污水不斷被排入河里。另外，無論我們走到哪里，到處可見隨意丟棄的垃圾。請根據(jù)以上事實寫一篇以保護(hù)環(huán)境為主題的文章，我們要采取以下措施來保護(hù)我們共有的家園。

1. 污染正威脅我們的生存。

2. 地球是我們的家園，我們有責(zé)任為我們自己和我們的后代去照顧好它

3. 政府已采取更多的措施去解決這些問題，法律已被通過去制止污染。

4. 堅信我們的家園會變得越來越好。

注意：1.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)

Protecting the Environment

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.

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Answer 1

【答案】Protecting the Environment

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.

The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.

【解析】試題分析：本文要求寫一篇以保護(hù)環(huán)境為主題的文章，要求我們采取措施來保護(hù)我們共有的家園。需要用正確的英語把給出的要點準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)出來。內(nèi)容要點如下：1. 污染正威脅我們的生存；2. 地球是我們的家園，我們有責(zé)任為我們自己和我們的后代去照顧好它；3. 政府已采取更多的措施去解決這些問題，法律已被通過去制止污染；4. 堅信我們的家園會變得越來越好。寫作材料已經(jīng)給的很詳細(xì)，寫作的時候關(guān)鍵在于要點不能有遺漏和省略。還要有適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗�同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時注意時態(tài)，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。

寫作亮點：本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：文章多處運用了被動語態(tài)：Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.等和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時態(tài)：Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.和Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.等，彰顯了句式的變化和感情色彩；另外詞組cope with（處理）。