Question

20．假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華，邀請交換生Peter參加你校在本月舉行的文明校園（civilized campus）創(chuàng)建活動．請根據(jù)以下要點，給他寫一封電子郵件．
1．活動目的；
2．活動內(nèi)容（倡導(dǎo)語言美、行為美、環(huán)境美）；
3．表示歡迎．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
It is great honor for me to invite you to take part in the activity"Build a Civilized Campus"this month．（高分句型一）
We aim at going hand in hand to set up our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet．（高分句型二）To achieve the goal，we'll call on the school to communicate with each other in polite words．Meanwhile，we should behave ourselves and obey school rules．As a nice environment is good for us，we'll space no effort to create a pleasant school environment．（高分句型三）All the above is to contribute to the good conduct of teachers and students in our school．
It would be nice if you could join us．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息 假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華，邀請交換生Peter參加你校在本月舉行的文明校園（civilized campus）創(chuàng)建活動．請根據(jù)以下要點，給他寫一封電子郵件．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：活動目的；活動內(nèi)容（倡導(dǎo)語言美、行為美、環(huán)境美）；表示歡迎． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：take part in參加；hand in hand手牽手；call on呼吁； communicate with溝通；Meanwhile同時；contribute to有助于；
It is great honor for me to invite you to take part in the activity"Build a Civilized Campus"this month．（高分句型一）
We aim at going hand in hand to set up our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet．（高分句型二）
As a nice environment is good for us，we'll space no effort to create a pleasant school environment．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      It is great honor for me to invite you to take part in the activity"Build a Civilized Campus"this month．（高分句型一）
      We aim at going hand in hand to set up our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet．（高分句型二）To achieve the goal，we'll call on the school to communicate with each other in polite words．Meanwhile，we should behave ourselves and obey school rules．As a nice environment is good for us，we'll space no effort to create a pleasant school environment．（高分句型三）All the above is to contribute to the good conduct of teachers and students in our school．
       It would be nice if you could join us．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．