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眾所周知，這些年我國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展迅速，可是環(huán)境污染也越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重，發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)與環(huán)境保護(hù)之間的關(guān)系問(wèn)題一直為社會(huì)各界所關(guān)注。下面是某班同學(xué)的討論結(jié)果，請(qǐng)你就此給某英文報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信介紹討論情況并簡(jiǎn)要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。
1. 一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展不應(yīng)以環(huán)境為代價(jià)。
理由：忽視環(huán)境而發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)將對(duì)環(huán)境造成破壞。列舉一些嚴(yán)重的環(huán)境問(wèn)題。
2. 一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展不應(yīng)考慮環(huán)境問(wèn)題。
理由：發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)必然帶來(lái)環(huán)境問(wèn)題，環(huán)境問(wèn)題是經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的副產(chǎn)品，等以后有了錢(qián)和時(shí)間再來(lái)解決。
3. 你的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)……
注意：1. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 詞數(shù)：150左右；
3. 參考詞匯：不可避免的unavoidable 副產(chǎn)品by-product
以……為代價(jià)at the cost of/ sacrifice …for …
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about the relationship between economic development and environmental protection.
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Answer 1

Dear editor
I am writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about the relationship between economic development and environment protection.
Some students believe we should never sacrifice environment for economy. They think the present environmental problems are largely caused by rapid economic development. For example, farmable land is decreasing because of the industrial development and the development of cities.
However, other students think it unnecessary to consider environmental problems now and economic development comes first. They believe that environmental problems are only the by-products of economic development, which are unavoidable. They can be dealt with later when we have the time and money.
I think the second view is completely wrong. The purpose of economic development is to provide a comfortable and happy life for our people. We should aim at sustainable development and a balance between the two.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本題是一篇材料作文。要求向英文報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，介紹討論發(fā)展與環(huán)保的結(jié)果。學(xué)生比較熟悉書(shū)信格式，作文要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出�？梢苑譃槿�段，第一段支持環(huán)保；第二段支持發(fā)展；第三段給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。作文必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，所給參考詞匯必須用上，否則會(huì)扣分。注意句與句之間，段與段之間的銜接要自然。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了第一人稱，比較有禮貌。范文條理清晰，邏輯明確，很好的表達(dá)了討論的結(jié)果和自己的觀點(diǎn)。I am writing to tell you about...是寫(xiě)信常用的開(kāi)頭格式。范文交替使用believe和think來(lái)表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)，避免了重復(fù)。范文使用For example, However等來(lái)連接前后文，使文章顯得自然流暢；范文使用了較多的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，像被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)are largely caused by和be dealt with；定語(yǔ)從句we’ve had about the relationship...和which are unavoidable；固定句型think it unnecessary to...和provide...for sb及The purpose of...is to；賓語(yǔ)從句believe that...；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句when we have the time and money；范文使用never和only來(lái)加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣，更能突出作者的態(tài)度和觀點(diǎn)；范文也使用了短語(yǔ)because of和aim at等，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。
考點(diǎn)：材料作文