Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你校上周五舉辦了一次消防演習(xí)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的順序?qū)懸黄�英語周記，記錄這次演習(xí)的全過程。

注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于60；

2．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3．提示詞：消防演習(xí) a fire drill，報(bào)警器 fire alarm，逃生路線 evacuation route

Last Friday, we practised a fire drill in the school.

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Answer 1

【答案】Possible version 1:

Last Friday, we practised a fire drill in the school. In the morning, we were having a class when suddenly some black smoke went into the classroom. At the same time, the fire alarm went off. So we quickly followed the evacuation route and went downstairs. Everyone bent down and used a towel to cover the noses and mouths. We went out of the teaching building in a short time. During that time, a fireman was counting time with his watch. It took us three minutes to get to the playground! The fireman was impressed by our quick action and praised us.

Possible version 2:

Last Friday, we practised a fire drill in the school. In the morning, we were in the middle of the English class when heavy smoke began floating into the classroom from the hallway. The fire alarm went off and we quickly got out of our classroom and followed the evacuation route. Everyone hurried downstairs to the playground, bending down and covering the noses and mouths with towels. At the same time, a fireman was timing us with his watch. When we got to the playground safe, he told us we had made it within 3 minutes. He praised us for our quick reactions. This fire drill helped us know a minute would make all the difference in an emergency.

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫類作文。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你校上周五舉辦了一次消防演習(xí)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的順序?qū)懸黄�英語周記，記錄這次演習(xí)的全過程。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：at the same time(同時(shí))；fire alarm (報(bào)警器)；a fire drill (消防演習(xí))；evacuation route (逃生路線)；teaching building(教學(xué)樓)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。