Question

19．請簡要描述下面圖片的內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />
（參考詞匯：霧霾haze，霧霾天氣 haze weather ）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
However，if we just copmlain without taking any steps，which will make no sense except being poisoned by the smog contiually．然而，如果我們只是一味的抱怨而不采取措施，那將毫無意義而且我們還會(huì)被霧霾毒害．
高分句型二：
Only when we shift our attention from cursing irritatedly to seeking its solutions can what troubles us be tackled．只有當(dāng)我們停止詛咒抱怨，轉(zhuǎn)而將精力放在尋求解決辦法的時(shí)候，那些困擾我們的問題才能被解決．
句型一 ①if we just copmlain without taking any steps該句是一個(gè)if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句
            ②which will make no sense except being poisoned by the smog contiually．該句是一個(gè)由which充當(dāng)引導(dǎo)詞，替代前面整句話內(nèi)容，且在句中充當(dāng)主語的非限制性定語從句
句型二 Only when we shift our attention…can what troubles us be tackled 該句使用了部分倒裝句，此處是當(dāng)only位于句首且修飾狀語從句的時(shí)候，主語要使用部分倒裝，將主語同謂語部分的助動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行位置的交換

解答 With one person thinking to himself how smelly the air is and the other contemplating  what we can actually do to solve it，as it depicted in the picture，the two persons are reacting in completely different ways to the haze weather，which has almsot suffocated citizens from the stricken areas．（提出論點(diǎn)）
      As for which person is acting significantly，the answer is apparantly evident．When facing the terribly polluted weather，it isn't how we feel but what we can do that actually matters．As the saying goes，"Actions speak louder than words"．Take immediate actions and we may bear the hope that the weather will no longer be worsening and one day in the future our offsprings can breathe in fresh air without any potential risk．However，if we just copmlain without taking any steps，which will make no sense except being poisoned by the smog contiually．（高分句型一）
     The message implied here is extremely clear that thinking how to resolve a problem and then acting without any hesitaion is of vital importance when encountering any problems like setbacks and challenges in our life．Only when we shift our attention from cursing irritatedly to seeking its solutions can what troubles us be tackled．（高分句型二）（提出解決辦法）

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)是一篇議論文，寫作時(shí)要求對某現(xiàn)象或觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行評述，一定要注意用足夠的論據(jù)來分層次論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)應(yīng)注意與主題句相呼應(yīng)．