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8．假如你校正在開(kāi)展英語(yǔ)演講活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)以"How To Be A Popular Student"為題，就一下三方面提出要成為一名受歡迎的學(xué)生應(yīng)具備的素質(zhì)，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120詞的短文參加該主題的演講．
1．對(duì)待集體；2．對(duì)待他人；3．對(duì)待自己．
注意：短文的開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）．
How To Be A Popular Student
If we want to be a popular student，we should be equipped with the following qualities．
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Answer 1

分析 本文的寫(xiě)作很好把握，成為一名受歡迎的同學(xué)，可以從三方面入筆來(lái)進(jìn)行闡述．首先，從對(duì)集體的利益出發(fā)，說(shuō)明應(yīng)將集體看成家一樣，可運(yùn)用regard…as的短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行行文；其次，從對(duì)待他人出發(fā)，說(shuō)明要對(duì)人表示尊重、熱忱，隨時(shí)幫助別人，可以用never hesitate to do sth句式來(lái)展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作；然后從對(duì)個(gè)人的要求方面，來(lái)說(shuō)明只有提高自己才能成為朋友中的佼佼者；最后一句話(huà)進(jìn)行總結(jié)，可以用all in all/above all等短語(yǔ)總結(jié)．
 高級(jí)表達(dá)
be equipped with 具備
be supposed to 應(yīng)該
sacrifice personal interests 犧牲個(gè)人利益
build up 逐步建立，增進(jìn)
give a hand 幫助
when it comes to sth．當(dāng)提到…
be strict with sb．嚴(yán)格對(duì)待某人

解答 To Be a Popular Student
   To Be a Popular Student，we should be equipped with the following qualities．（全文總括）
   To enjoy popularity，we are supposed to regard the class as our family and sacrifice our personal interests whenever necessary．（高分句式一）Besides taking an active part in class activities，we should work responsibly to build up a good reputation for the team．（對(duì)待集體）
   In addition，students with high popularity are those who show respect，concern，and sympathy for others．（高分句式二）So undoubtedly，we should never hesitate to give a hand to those in need．（對(duì)待他人）
   Finally，when it comes to gaining popularity，one thing that can't be ignored is to be strict with ourselves，making every effort to achieve an all-round development．In time of success，we should remain modest，while in time of difficulty，we should keep strong-minded．（對(duì)待自己）
   All in all，popularity with classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their qualities．（高分句式三）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的文章較開(kāi)放式的文體，比較好寫(xiě)．學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，首先思路要清晰，要對(duì)所表達(dá)的句子通順的說(shuō)出來(lái)，遇到不會(huì)的要學(xué)會(huì)替換所用語(yǔ)，來(lái)達(dá)到同樣的意思．在每一篇作文中，對(duì)于表達(dá)觀(guān)點(diǎn)的句子，都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的層次感，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用俗語(yǔ)，如when it comes to當(dāng)談到，運(yùn)用平時(shí)常用的句式來(lái)使文章富有變化，表達(dá)地道得體．