Question

10．假如你是李華，你校即將舉行一年一度的"校園書市 （a campus book fair）"活動(dòng)，其目的是給同學(xué)們提供一個(gè)交換、利用圖書的機(jī)會(huì)．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫信給你的加拿大筆友Mike，介紹此次活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況．
內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1．活動(dòng)目的；
2．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：買書，賣書，交換圖書；
3．活動(dòng)意義．
Dear Mike，
How are you doing these days？
                         
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給加拿大筆友Mike寫一封信．介紹學(xué)校即將舉行的一年一度的"校園書市 （a campus book fair）"活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．活動(dòng)目的； 2．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3．活動(dòng)意義．
重要短語(yǔ)：be aimed at sth（目的在于），have a chance to do sth（有機(jī)會(huì)做某事），make use of（利用），exchange sth with sb（和某人交換某物），be attracted by（被…吸引），motivate sb to do sth（激勵(lì)某人做某事），develop reading habits（培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣），broaden one's horizons（拓寬某人的視野）．
【高分句型一】
1．Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books，the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school．
   此處是由過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)"aimed at …"作目的狀語(yǔ)，主句為"the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school"，主句的主語(yǔ)為"the annual campus book fair"與所給動(dòng)詞"aim"構(gòu)成邏輯上的被動(dòng)關(guān)系．
【高分句型二】
2．The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school，who are to sell，purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語(yǔ)．
【高分句型三】
3．For one thing，the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics，motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)"motivating us to …"作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，主句為"the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics"，主句的主語(yǔ)為"the fair"與所給動(dòng)詞"motivate"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．

解答 Dear Mike，
How are you doing these days？（開(kāi)頭----問(wèn)候）
Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books，the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school．【高分句型一】（活動(dòng)目的）The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school，who are to sell，purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers．【高分句型二】（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容）
As a regular visitor，I've found myself increasingly attracted by the fair．For one thing，the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics，motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons．【高分句型三】For another，most books are sold at a lower price than what the bookstores offer．（活動(dòng)意義）
Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to host such a book fair better．（結(jié)尾---期待回復(fù)）
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．