Question

20．最近一項調查表明，將近有50%的學生不吃早餐，請用英語寫一篇文章．
內容包括：1．不吃早餐的害處及原因
2..你的建議
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右 （開頭已經給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文內容充實連貫．
A study shows that nearly 50% percent of the students don't have breakfast．
They tend to feel sleepy in class and have bad memories，so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of test．（高分句型）
Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．（高分句型）Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them．In addition，a few schoolgirls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast．
In fact，the morning meal plays an important part．It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy，which helps improve the efficiency of their studying．（高分句型）So school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇傳統(tǒng)作文，中文提示即文章的主要內容，考生切入容易，內容貼近考生生活，考試有話可說，可以有感而發(fā)．具有一定的生活性．要求學生根據中文提示，分析不吃早餐的原因，后果和根據這個現(xiàn)象提出一定的建議，考試要在表達的時候適當使用高級詞匯，句型和各種連接詞，使文章連貫，自然，句型多樣化，有利于分數(shù)檔次的提高．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：tend to 傾向于；In addition另外； In fact事實上
It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy，which helps improve the efficiency of their studying．（高分句型）句中使用了which引導的非限制性定語從句
Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．（高分句型）句中使用了who引導的限制性定語從句

解答 A study shows that nearly 50% percent of the students don't have breakfast．They tend to feel sleepy in class and have bad memories，so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of test．（高分句型）   
    Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．（高分句型）Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them．In addition，a few schoolgirls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast．
    In fact，the morning meal plays an important part．It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy，which helps improve the efficiency of their studying．（高分句型）So school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．