Question

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Ways to Keep Healthy
飲食健康，多吃水果蔬菜，保持均衡飲食．	摒棄（get rid of）不良習慣，按時吃早飯．	早睡早起，多做運動，強身健體．

Health is very important to us．Good health can help us enjoy our life more．But how to keep us healthy
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Answer 1

分析 考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)．要求介紹．同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．
【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的短語，可見英語功底扎實．．如we'd better eat more vegetables and fruits．It's important for us to keep a balanced diet．it's good for us to go to bed early and get up early等，F(xiàn)irst，Second，Third，F(xiàn)inally等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理．
First，we should eat healthy food，and we'd better eat more vegetables and fruits．（高分句型一）
The more regularly we eat，the healthier we are．（高分句型二）
 If we do like that，we'll have a happy and healthy life．（高分句型三）

解答 Health is very important to us．Good health can help us enjoy our life more．But how to keep us healthy？First，we should eat healthy food，and we'd better eat more vegetables and fruits．（高分句型一）It's important for us to keep a balanced diet．Second，we have to get rid of bad habits．We must have a regular breakfast．The more regularly we eat，the healthier we are．（高分句型二）Third，it's good for us to go to bed early and get up early．Finally，we need to take enough exercise to make us strong．
      If we do like that，we'll have a happy and healthy life．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．