Question

13．臨近學期期末，學校生活對于你的印象是什么？同學作為你學生生活的陪伴伙伴一定給你帶來了很多快樂．以My classmate為題，寫一篇描述你身邊的同學的文章．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road．
句子里使用了see sb doing，意思是看到某人正在做某事．
（高分句型二）She told him where she lived，and he took her home．When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson．
在這句里，where she lived是一個賓語從句，放在tell后面；另外，使用了when引導的時間狀語從句，注意句子的時態(tài)使用，在主句中使用了had begun的過去完成時．
重點短語和句型：be ready to do準備做某事；on his way to 在去某個地方的路上；too frightened to move太而不能；caught her by the arm抓住它的胳膊；was praised for 為…而受到表揚．

解答 My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate．He is a good student and always ready to help others．
（高分句型一）One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road．A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move．The car nearly hit her．Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm．The little girl was saved．（高分句型二）She told him where she lived，and he took her home．When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson．He told the teacher why he was late．He was then praised for what he had done．

點評 寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，明確要點．2、注意將敘述、描寫等手法結合到議論中，為議論提供依據(jù)．3、注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．