Question

現(xiàn)在越來越多的人選擇在網(wǎng)上找工作。請你就此現(xiàn)象以“Hunting for a Job on the Internet”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文，發(fā)表自己的看法。內(nèi)容包括：

1．人們寧愿在網(wǎng)上找工作而不愿選擇傳統(tǒng)的方法；

2．在網(wǎng)上找工作的原因：

(1)方便 (2)簡單( 3)失敗也不會難堪

3．你對在網(wǎng)上找工作的看法。

Answer 1

Hunting for a Job on the Internet

Nowadays more and more people would rather look for a job on the Internet than in the newspapers or in a job market. There are many reasons for their preference, one of which is that a job hunter can find a job conveniently without bothering to get recommendations from relatives or friends, or registration at an employment exchange. Besides, a job hunter can get a job by simply browsing among the ads online and sending resumes by e?mails. Finally, the success rate is very high, and even if one fails to find a job, it can spare him the embarrassment of being refused.

As for me, I believe that with the increasing popularity of the Internet, this new way will win favor among more and more jobless people and laid?off workers for its convenience, efficiency and high success rate.

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文是個提綱作文，要點(diǎn)要求詳盡。因?yàn)槊枋龅氖乾F(xiàn)階段的一現(xiàn)象，故基本時態(tài)應(yīng)定為一般現(xiàn)在時。又因?yàn)閷懽饕�點(diǎn)涉及到：現(xiàn)象、原因及看法，這三個主要方面，故考生應(yīng)邏輯清晰、主次分明地將要點(diǎn)鋪陳開來。

亮點(diǎn)說明：該范文時態(tài)使用正確，要點(diǎn)全面，寫作思路清晰——先概括現(xiàn)象，再詳細(xì)分析其原因，最后表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，且詳略得當(dāng)。此外，該考生注意語句的銜接，“Besides”, “Finally”，“As for me,”的使用恰到好處。而用語的地道和高級句式的合理運(yùn)用，例如：“would rather… than…”，“by simply browsing … and sending …”，定語從句“…one of which…”也使得文章錦上添花。