Question

如果有一場(chǎng)神奇的價(jià)值拍賣(mài)會(huì) (auction)，你可以拍下你最想要的東西，你會(huì)為什么而舉牌？請(qǐng)?jiān)谝韵碌母?jìng)拍內(nèi)容中，選出你最想得到的三樣?xùn)|西，并闡明你選擇的理由。

競(jìng)拍內(nèi)容：愛(ài)心、夢(mèng)想、名牌大學(xué)錄取通知書(shū)（admission notice）、聰明、快樂(lè)、誠(chéng)信、自由、權(quán)利、友情、金錢(qián)等。

100字左右， 不含開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)。

Different people may bid for different things.

                                                                                                                                                                                               

                                                                                                                                                                                                 

                                                                                                                                                                                      

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Different people may bid for different things. As for me, I want dream, friendship and an admission notice to a famous university most.

Dreams would be on the top of my list. Only by pursuing our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled life. Money can buy a comfortable life , but without dreams, even a millionaire would find his life boring.

A person without friends can never be happy. Our life is full of joys and sorrows, which we need people to share with. Faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help. Just as a saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friendship ca help us through ups and downs of life, so friendship would be in my list as well.

【解析】

試題分析：本題為材料作文，但內(nèi)容很新穎，其實(shí)就是再考查你什么下面的幾個(gè)方面哪個(gè)更重要，題目的設(shè)題方式很有趣。對(duì)于選擇的對(duì)象可謂智者見(jiàn)智，仁者見(jiàn)仁，只要思想健康進(jìn)步，說(shuō)明理由，詳略得當(dāng)既可。比如你開(kāi)篇可以選擇friendship,起到開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山的作用，然后用詳細(xì)的篇幅寫(xiě)出原因即可。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文達(dá)到了高考作文的復(fù)雜句型結(jié)構(gòu)的要求，在文中起到了畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)晴的作用，使文章有氣勢(shì)，例如Only by pursuing our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled life.正解且恰到好處的用到了倒裝。同時(shí)也使用上了大家耳熟能詳?shù)闹V語(yǔ)，使文章增色不少，例如：“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”

【考點(diǎn)】考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言的綜合運(yùn)用能力