Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

My birthday is coming. Father asked me how I would want as my birthday present. I told him I need no present but a party. Father said OK. When I recited the name of my seven friends I planned to invite, he wondered why his guest list did not include my new neighbor Tom. I told him about that I didn’t like to be with a person whom I didn’t know well. And father insisted that I should seize the chance to make new friends. In my birthday, Tom came including my seven friends. Very quick we became good friends. From this I realized give others a chance means giving myself a chance. It was a really forgettable birthday.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】how → what

【2】need → needed

【3】name → names

【4】his → my

【5】去掉about

【6】And → But

【7】In → On

【8】quick → quickly

【9】give → giving

【10】forgettable → unforgettable

【解析】

試題分析： 通過本文的閱讀和改錯，考查學生的固定搭配和時態(tài)和非謂語動詞的用法、連詞、冠詞的區(qū)別等。

【1】how → what 考查賓語從句的連接詞。how I would want做ask的賓語，want需要一個賓語，用what，how是副詞，常做方式狀語。

【2】need → needed 考查動詞的一致性。told后的賓語從句和主句時態(tài)一致，前面是過去式，這里也應該用動詞的過去式needed。

【3】name → names 考查名詞的數。這里的意思是：7個朋友的名字。name是可數名詞，當然應該用它的復數形式names。

【4】his → my 考查代詞。he wondered why his guest list did not include my new neighbor Tom.的意思是：他想知道為什么我的客人名單里沒有我的新鄰居Tom，所以代詞應該是my。

【5】去掉about 考查動詞。tell somebody something。告訴某人某事。about that I didn’t like to be with a person whom I didn’t know well.是賓語從句，about沒用，應該去掉。

【6】And → But 考查并列連詞。我不想邀請不熟悉的人，但是父親堅持要我抓住結交朋友的機會。and表遞進，而本句前后表轉折，所以用But。

【7】In → On 考查介詞。這里的意思是：在生日那一天。在具體的某一天用On。

【8】quick → quickly 考查副詞。 這里用副詞修飾全文，意思是：我們很快成為朋友。所以quick → quickly。

【9】give → giving 考查非謂語動詞。分析句子give others a chance means giving myself a chance.可知，give others a chance是主語，而動詞不能做主語，應該用動詞-ing做主語，和后面的賓語giving myself a chance一致，所以give → giving。

【10】forgettable → unforgettable 考查語境的理解。這是一個難忘的生日。forgettable 的意思是：健忘的；unforgettable的意思是：難忘的。所以forgettable → unforgettable。